Love or Lust?

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (19) Comments  |  

it was love at first sight,
the moment i met you,
sparks flew and brought us,
closer and together;Romantic Cuddling

barely a minute goes by,
without me thinking,
is this too good,
to be true;

i pinch myself from time to time,
just to make sure i am not dreaming,
and not hallucinating all this,
between you and me;

a touch here, a touch there,
a kiss here, a kiss there,
a gentle caress, a playful nibble,
hands all over everytime we are together;

few seconds of leaving you out of my sight,
a frantic search begins, scanning everything and everywhere,
and it stops only when i find you,
standing, smiling and playing with my heart;

your lips against mine,
as we indulge in our sins,
your body next to mine,
entwined in our flame of ecstasy;

in the moonlight glow,
as we drift into deep peace,
tell me baby,
is it Love or is it Lust?

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this can either be taken as a standalone poem or as a continuation of the previous two poems – Love at First Sight and Together.

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Comments

  • Anjali said: (Thursday December 1st, 2011)

    Awesome poetry!!! Wow! too sexy and very real! :)

  • megan said: (Saturday December 10th, 2011)

    This is amazing!!!! can i use it to write a song and you would get full credit too!

  • Praveen said: (Sunday December 11th, 2011)

    Hi Megan, you can use this provided a full credit is given with the website url.

  • meera said: (Wednesday January 4th, 2012)

    What a talented poet u are praveen.i read this poem 5 times ,that much nice your poetry .keep on posting.we are here to read.wish u the best!

  • 2-of-me said: (Friday January 6th, 2012)

    Beautifully spoken. As I read this writing, I went back to my 2011 summer lover. Two lustful weekends together, following several months of romantic e-mails and followed up by several more.

    It’s all over now as she could not cope with a long distant relationship where time together was limited to telephone conversations, e-mails, texts and annual visits to be together.

    Though I still cherish her so, remaining in my heart and soul both day and night. I now accept our relationship as a close friendship and pray only that someday it may be more.

  • Sandy said: (Wednesday January 25th, 2012)

    Beautiful poetry!!!! I love this poem too!!! But tell me can it be both love and lust?? Been living with my boyfriend for over a year and I dearly love him!!!

  • Edie said: (Friday January 27th, 2012)

    “Love or Lust” sounds like lust turned into love. Sometimes that’s the way it goes… but friendship, companionship and trust in my opinion is the best way to start a relationship. Edie T.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    Thank you Sandy. It can be both love and lust, buts that only a small percentage, i think.

  • SIZWE said: (Tuesday February 28th, 2012)

    i like your poem praveen. i wish your can allow me to pick some words from it to write my our song(rap)

  • Michelle Kuiper said: (Wednesday February 29th, 2012)

    Absolutely beautiful poem! Would love to have that kind of lust and love…!

  • Praveen said: (Thursday March 1st, 2012)

    Thank you Michelle.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday March 1st, 2012)

    Thank you Sizwe. Please do as long as you can provide the credit.

  • kaitlyn said: (Thursday March 1st, 2012)

    u r a great poet u and me r alike because im a free verse poet and talk about lively things props to u

  • kavita said: (Friday March 9th, 2012)

    Nice description of lust and love..Nice one Praveen!

  • bhanu said: (Tuesday April 10th, 2012)

    wow praveen.! The poem is excellently written and potrays the anbivalence of love. I think the poem is beautiful in its honesty. Kip writing. I have turned up to be ur new fan.

  • (shariq khan) said: (Friday April 13th, 2012)

    outstanding ………

  • angel said: (Wednesday April 18th, 2012)

    My god who are you ? i am in love with this poem..

  • mahumshoukat said: (Thursday April 26th, 2012)

    lovely owsome

  • gege ramon said: (Wednesday September 5th, 2012)

    AN OUTSTANDING POEM! i love your work.


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