Love Poems

Together

Praveen Kumar Praveen Kumar 1 min read
Together
just you and me, holding hands and looking into each other's eyes, it's been a while, it's been a long time;
lost in this madness of life, closer but farther away, from each other, i don't know what to do;
alone and lost, this dream is all that keeps me alive, keeps me and you alive, waiting for the moment it becomes a reality;
counting the days, to meet you on the other side, high above the world, over and over in my mind;
i close my eyes and i see you there, i drift away to sleep and you are there, waiting for me to escape reality and dive into this dream, where you and me, together;
together, till the shining sun, together, till madness rises again, together, we will make this dream come true, together sooner!

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15 comments

Tapan Parmar November 2, 2011 - 11:04 pm

Amazing..!! Just loved it..!!!

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Purnima November 3, 2011 - 3:46 am

Beautiful!

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sainha November 4, 2011 - 2:24 am

nice:)
thumbs up!

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sainha November 4, 2011 - 2:25 am

nice:)
thumbs up!
post another poems pls.

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Ruth November 10, 2011 - 2:43 pm

so sweet. loved it.

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kyle November 14, 2011 - 7:25 am

i don`t have words for this ,
i owe to you for this , thanks a lot .
hope will see some more in future .

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susan November 14, 2011 - 2:30 pm

hi praveen! i like your poem..is it okay that i post it on my notes in facebook..hope you dont mind…thanks a lot..keep writing beautiful and meaningful poem.

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Praveen November 16, 2011 - 8:41 pm

Thank you. You can post it as a note, but please give the credit along with the website url.

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Brittany Brewer December 5, 2011 - 11:29 am

this is the best poem i read in a long time 🙂 i love this poem this is my number one poem in my book…

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xavier December 26, 2011 - 10:00 pm

I just read two of your poems and I’m already a fan of your work

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hillary chua chien January 17, 2012 - 12:40 am

tears rolle ddown my eyes as i read this poen. . . i can emphatized, it seems you are saying the emotions that i had kept inside and what i have been wanting to say. . . awesome .

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mangotango February 23, 2012 - 6:37 am

awesome about to cry lol 10/11

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Eleanor April 9, 2012 - 10:26 pm

i love this poem i really felt the sadness and the hope!! 🙂

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Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren July 13, 2012 - 4:40 am

lovely! you definitely did a good job on this one! 🙂 ~

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erica maples March 26, 2013 - 2:25 pm

i love that poem it has so-much life and love to it

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