Praveen Kumar 
as the sun rises, like a zombie, trapped in this dream i watch life pass by;
i wandered alone, fighting all that came in my way, struggling to make sense of this war, that does not seem to stop;
a shell of what i used to be, i wear a mask to hide me from the vultures that prowl all around, wanting something to chew on;
no emotion, no pain and, no happiness, just a haunted emptiness;
alone i sit, in the grip of darkness, as the arms of silence slowly engulf me, a strange numbess takes over me;
11 comments
too good……..
I always followed praveen’s poem and I can emphatize with his sadness. AM just hoping that he can also see the other side of life. The hope and the joy.
this is how i can also describe life!!!!!
i love the peom,and i can relate to it
This poem was really good one of the best. I could feel his pain and can also relate to myself. Thank you for sharing and hope you find hapiness in life.
Very, very powerful – well written.
You can tell its straight from the heart and mind
Very well done
A gud dark poem…
Sometimes this is how i feel,And this is true <3
Thank you.
This poem is completly true i sit at the back of the classroom crying from getting blamed and no one cares a feel empty and lonely and i bet soon my eyes will be gone from my tears X_x
exaclty how i feel too, excellent