as the sun rises,
like a zombie,
trapped in this dream
i watch life pass by;
i wandered alone,
fighting all that came in my way,
struggling to make sense of this
war, that does not seem to stop;
a shell of what i used to be,
i wear a mask to hide me from
the vultures that prowl all around,
wanting something to chew on;
no emotion,
no pain and,
no happiness,
just a haunted emptiness;
alone i sit,
in the grip of darkness,
as the arms of silence slowly engulf me,
a strange numbess takes over me;
too good……..
I always followed praveen’s poem and I can emphatize with his sadness. AM just hoping that he can also see the other side of life. The hope and the joy.
this is how i can also describe life!!!!!
i love the peom,and i can relate to it
This poem was really good one of the best. I could feel his pain and can also relate to myself. Thank you for sharing and hope you find hapiness in life.
Very, very powerful – well written.
You can tell its straight from the heart and mind
Very well done
A gud dark poem…
Sometimes this is how i feel,And this is true <3
This poem is completly true i sit at the back of the classroom crying from getting blamed and no one cares a feel empty and lonely and i bet soon my eyes will be gone from my tears X_x
Thank you.
exaclty how i feel too, excellent