its midnight and
my eyes just staring at the wall opposite
no sleep, no dreams,
i sit and watch the drama
unfolding before me;
like an empty canvas
waiting for an artist
i wait in anticipation
wondering when and wondering why;
i did all i could,
so i believe so,
what is happening is beyond my grasp
and i can only watch as a mere spectator;
a mere spectator in my own life
one moment its all the way up,
the next its hanging in balance,
the tension is nerve wracking;
patience is all i have
and patience is all that i need
as i watch the things unfold
and let things take shape at its own pace;
i waited a long time for this,
so what difference it is going to make
to wait a little bit more
but for how long should i be the villian in my own life;
i wish i could answer all the questions running in my mind,
i wish i could end all the battles being fought inside,
i wish i do not have to wait for long
i wish, i hope and i believe
(maybe) tomorrow will be better than today;
this is amazing !!! i love how you wrote this. this hit home
this is so so so good
really its true
wow,I’m looking for truth in life,and I just found it.
a great piece of work.. i love it.. it really tells about my life..keep up your gud work
Really Awesome…..as if someone is telling about my life…..
amazing…Keep it up
this poem probably published the untold part of the life…directly touch to heart if somebody reads that in the sense the poem is written..fabulous …fantastic writting
It is fabulous…keep the good work:)
yaar mast poem hai
wow…this is awesome….i will love to read more of your works
hi
ist faboulous!!!!!!!!!!!
jeeeeeeeeeeez….
this is awesome 😀
keep it up yo! 😉
love it its really true
very meaningfulllllllll
love it so ^^
Its a good one
i am only 15 and i understand what your saying it tuch me. just mebe i and my family can make anther day its hard waiting.hopeing that my parents won’t ends this now.your words gave me comfrt to not quit and keep going.that i am not alone.=-)
hi….i totally loved ur poem…it has a soul..a meaning…i want others to know abt it too…bt since its ur work, i wont do anything without ur permission…do u mind if i publish it in my college magazine?..i wont if u dont want me to…bt seriously if u dont mind can i?
praveen u r awesome …… superlike……….:)
This is my life story😔I love your pome thank you 😃
i love that poem it speaks to me in a way that nothing else ever could, and that’s why i love it to much, thnx for writing it for us to read and enjoy