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Tomorrow will be better than today

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its midnight andtomorrow is a better day than today
my eyes just staring at the wall opposite
no sleep, no dreams,
i sit and watch the drama
unfolding before me;

like an empty canvas
waiting for an artist
i wait in anticipation
wondering when and wondering why;

i did all i could,
so i believe so,
what is happening is beyond my grasp
and i can only watch as a mere spectator;

a mere spectator in my own life
one moment its all the way up,
the next its hanging in balance,
the tension is nerve wracking;

patience is all i have
and patience is all that i need
as i watch the things unfold
and let things take shape at its own pace;

i waited a long time for this,
so what difference it is going to make
to wait a little bit more
but for how long should i be the villian in my own life;

i wish i could answer all the questions running in my mind,
i wish i could end all the battles being fought inside,
i wish i do not have to wait for long
i wish, i hope and i believe
(maybe) tomorrow will be better than today;

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22 comments

sophie March 25, 2010 - 1:20 pm

this is amazing !!! i love how you wrote this. this hit home

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john March 28, 2010 - 6:15 pm

this is so so so good

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savita March 31, 2010 - 1:05 am

really its true

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Hannah April 16, 2010 - 9:35 am

wow,I’m looking for truth in life,and I just found it.

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sobbanaa April 25, 2010 - 7:52 am

a great piece of work.. i love it.. it really tells about my life..keep up your gud work

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Shweta May 30, 2010 - 11:34 pm

Really Awesome…..as if someone is telling about my life…..
amazing…Keep it up

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tathagata June 5, 2010 - 8:34 pm

this poem probably published the untold part of the life…directly touch to heart if somebody reads that in the sense the poem is written..fabulous …fantastic writting

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Sophia June 16, 2010 - 8:15 am

It is fabulous…keep the good work:)

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kuulkat June 26, 2010 - 9:02 pm

yaar mast poem hai

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sachs June 30, 2010 - 10:51 am

wow…this is awesome….i will love to read more of your works

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yash August 18, 2010 - 7:31 am

hi
ist faboulous!!!!!!!!!!!

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nini :) September 14, 2010 - 5:35 am

jeeeeeeeeeeez….
this is awesome πŸ˜€
keep it up yo! πŸ˜‰

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yash September 24, 2010 - 4:34 am

love it its really true

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Ankit September 25, 2010 - 4:32 am

very meaningfulllllllll

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cicillia novita October 2, 2010 - 5:05 pm

love it so ^^

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Julio October 18, 2010 - 10:28 pm

Its a good one

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DJ November 12, 2010 - 6:21 pm

i am only 15 and i understand what your saying it tuch me. just mebe i and my family can make anther day its hard waiting.hopeing that my parents won’t ends this now.your words gave me comfrt to not quit and keep going.that i am not alone.=-)

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charmin February 7, 2011 - 7:30 am

hi….i totally loved ur poem…it has a soul..a meaning…i want others to know abt it too…bt since its ur work, i wont do anything without ur permission…do u mind if i publish it in my college magazine?..i wont if u dont want me to…bt seriously if u dont mind can i?

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poetrylover July 7, 2011 - 4:46 am

praveen u r awesome …… superlike……….:)

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Sherin April 26, 2012 - 10:03 pm

This is my life storyπŸ˜”I love your pome thank you πŸ˜ƒ

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erica maples February 24, 2013 - 11:56 am

i love that poem it speaks to me in a way that nothing else ever could, and that’s why i love it to much, thnx for writing it for us to read and enjoy

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