I Wish

Written By: samvanna  |  Category: Life  |  (9) Comments  |  

laugh all day, cry all night,
always saying nothings wrong,
everythings alright,
never wanting to admit
how you really feel inside
because all you really want
to do is run away and hide

i wish, just wish that..
maybe, just maybe
i could lose myself in a world
that wasn’t my own,
a world where only
you and I exist.

night and day would become
one in the same,
every problem in the world
would melt away.

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  • ihave1wish said: (Thursday March 19th, 2009)

    That was a really beautiful poem! I hope this wish comes true! And if you want to share your wish with others check out our site!
    :)!

  • jay said: (Saturday March 21st, 2009)

    lovly

  • J immy Sparrkkie said: (Monday March 30th, 2009)

    Oh My Gosh! That was the most lovliest poem i have ever read. Bravo. Bravo.

  • kayla said: (Monday April 6th, 2009)

    hey i made your poem into a song and i think its really gd im going to perform it i wanna give you credit for the lyrics cuz they are trully beautifull :D

  • keidra said: (Monday May 4th, 2009)

    this is a great poem i really luv it

  • cherry said: (Tuesday May 4th, 2010)

    vry nice=)

  • Beth said: (Tuesday August 17th, 2010)

    That was so nice, and so true i feel like that everyday. my life sucks and your poem is just lovely. your a great poet.

  • cuty hanna said: (Saturday February 5th, 2011)

    i really love this poem cuz i feel like it’s talkin abou me =)

  • Saeed Rehman said: (Sunday April 24th, 2011)

    wow…….Perfect


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