Friendship Poems

When Friends Let…

Near to the door he paused to stand as he took his class ring off her hand all who were watching did not speak as a silent tear ran down his cheek and through his mind the memories ran of the moments they walked and ran in the sand (hand and hand) but now her eyes were so terribly cold* for he would never again have her to hold they watched in silence as he bent near and whispered the words..... "I LOVE YOU" in her ear he touched her face and started to cry as he put on his ring and wanted to die and just then the wind began to blow as they lowered her casket into the snow.... this is what happens to man alive..... when friends let friends.... drink and drive.

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Ryan April 30, 2010 - 12:46 pm

first words that came into my head after I saw that last line was “i’m a complete dick” I just got a dui recently and I don’t think I’d live with myself If I had hurt someone, let alone killed them…..that brought a tear to my eye man…I’m never ever ever ever touching anything with a motor even after 1 beer…I already learned my lesson, and this poem just taught me another. :'(

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Lee November 14, 2011 - 1:12 pm

This poem was well written

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Lee November 14, 2011 - 1:14 pm

I’m so sorry that happend

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