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Close to my Heart

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disconnected from the world tonight
with my mind blank and seemingly shut tight
this emptiness that i feel all around me,
seems all the more familiar;

choking me from the inside,
my heart bundled up in my throat,
i could not say a word,
speechless, is all that i have become;

not a long left before this agony turns into ecstasy,
each day seems a bit longer than the previous one,
yet each moment that takes a eon to pass by,
makes it all worthwhile;

shivers rush up my spine
as the midnight air gently caress past,
i lay on my back and count the stars
twinkling in the moonlit sky, all alone;

why do we live
so far apart
i don’t know
but you will always be…..
Close to My Heart!!!

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16 comments

KingOfHearts June 11, 2010 - 9:22 am

nice poem, touching heart. ^_^

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Anupriya June 13, 2010 - 4:46 am

Hello Praveen,
just wanted to let u know, i’ve read almost all your poems and am a big fan of your poetry. very simple and beautifully expressed words and the most important thing is that they are very similar to mine. yes, i too write poems, very rarely though. would love to share them in this wonderful poetry world of yours. keep the good work going. its a real pleasure reading your poems.
Regards,
anu

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Praveen June 14, 2010 - 7:18 am

Thank you Anu. I am glad to hear that and would be great if you can share some of your poems. Would love to read them.

Regards
Praveen

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Mohan June 20, 2010 - 6:35 am

hi praveen,

simply superb…there is no words to express.
as u had expressed in your poetry.
what to tell about these poetries…………..
Really those are heart touching.
keep it going…

regards.
Mohan

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Kar June 21, 2010 - 6:56 am

Hi Praveen,

Wonderful poem! heart-felt!

-K

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carol June 28, 2010 - 5:05 am

i love the poem….!!!
its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
gr8 wrk !!!!

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Nina August 29, 2010 - 9:36 am

amazing poem

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Lovely Bushra October 5, 2010 - 6:00 am

wow this is beautiful poetry

I love these lines –

“I may not always be here for you,
I may not always say, ” I love you ”
But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
You will always be my knight in shining armor.”

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tiara December 6, 2010 - 10:14 am

this poem touch and i really love it god bless you never stop writting

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mais radwan December 28, 2010 - 12:18 pm

it’s such a gr8 poem rly i like it …………plz don’t stop writing coz every poem u’ll write u’ll feel more better…..! <3

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Youa December 28, 2010 - 4:09 pm

Lovely Poem <3

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legnaylla March 19, 2011 - 9:41 am

i….ummm..perso…sorry forget it

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yuna_vera June 8, 2011 - 9:54 pm

what a lovely poem….thanks..*smiles*

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Gayatri June 25, 2011 - 4:57 am

hey Praveen
i really like your poems especially the one Close To My Heart.its really amazing keep up your sprit its really a heart-touching poem

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Kulveer Kaur March 22, 2012 - 12:59 pm

Really Praveen,all of poems are heart Touching.Love to Read them….

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Praveen March 26, 2012 - 11:06 pm

Thank you.

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