disconnected from the world tonight
with my mind blank and seemingly shut tight
this emptiness that i feel all around me,
seems all the more familiar;
choking me from the inside,
my heart bundled up in my throat,
i could not say a word,
speechless, is all that i have become;
not a long left before this agony turns into ecstasy,
each day seems a bit longer than the previous one,
yet each moment that takes a eon to pass by,
makes it all worthwhile;
shivers rush up my spine
as the midnight air gently caress past,
i lay on my back and count the stars
twinkling in the moonlit sky, all alone;
why do we live
so far apart
i don’t know
but you will always be…..
Close to My Heart!!!
nice poem, touching heart. ^_^
just wanted to let u know, i’ve read almost all your poems and am a big fan of your poetry. very simple and beautifully expressed words and the most important thing is that they are very similar to mine. yes, i too write poems, very rarely though. would love to share them in this wonderful poetry world of yours. keep the good work going. its a real pleasure reading your poems.
Thank you Anu. I am glad to hear that and would be great if you can share some of your poems. Would love to read them.
simply superb…there is no words to express.
as u had expressed in your poetry.
what to tell about these poetries…………..
Really those are heart touching.
keep it going…
Wonderful poem! heart-felt!
i love the poem….!!!
its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
gr8 wrk !!!!
wow this is beautiful poetry
I love these lines –
“I may not always be here for you,
I may not always say, ” I love you ”
But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
You will always be my knight in shining armor.”
this poem touch and i really love it god bless you never stop writting
it’s such a gr8 poem rly i like it …………plz don’t stop writing coz every poem u’ll write u’ll feel more better…..! <3
Lovely Poem <3
i….ummm..perso…sorry forget it
what a lovely poem….thanks..*smiles*
i really like your poems especially the one Close To My Heart.its really amazing keep up your sprit its really a heart-touching poem
Really Praveen,all of poems are heart Touching.Love to Read them….