Whispers of the night

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (7) Comments  |  

Whispers of the Night

walking down the street
with an empty feeling
thoughts of you flood my mind
just as the heavens above opened up;

lost and looking for answers
dreams and hopes that was once
within reach, now seems
a million miles away;

sitting next to the rain splattered window,
watching the shadow of darkness slowly fade away,
the words to express my pain linger in the back of my mind
kept locked up within me, unable to escape the imaginary fence that i built around;

i cornered the fears that restrained my emotions,
bridging the distance between you and me,
i took a giant leap into the dream
that i wanted to become a reality;

gathering strength, i said the three words,
that had been waiting to explode from within me,
everything that i tried to hide from you for so long
finally tumbled out of the closet and into the open;

as the distant roar of the thunder
wakes me up from the passionate slumber,
i crawl closer trying to be next to you,
to hold you close,
and to hold you tight;

as the lovely night slowly
gives way to a beautiful morning,
still entwined in each other’s arms,
softly whispering to the special one,
who made a dream into a reality
i just want the world to know that
I LOVE YOU!

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Comments

  • raji krishnan said: (Wednesday January 28th, 2009)

    it’s loverrrrlllyyy :)

  • crystal said: (Tuesday March 24th, 2009)

    that was a rlly cute poem:D you rlly have a sweet side.lol

  • hillary said: (Monday August 15th, 2011)

    This is awesome , beyond words can compare. . . hope to know u more Mr.Praveen im so inlove with ur thoughts and poems

  • roma said: (Thursday November 10th, 2011)

    so nice and impressive i like it a lot as i feel everything u weave in ur writing…..

  • meera said: (Wednesday January 4th, 2012)

    What a nice poem…it’s really touch my heart ….

  • ritika said: (Thursday January 19th, 2012)

    it made my heart tremble…….beautiful…expressing love…d most divine feeling on earth…..

  • gege said: (Tuesday July 17th, 2012)

    wow! that touched my heart. beautiful poem! thumbs up for the person who wrote this.


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