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Make my wish come true

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Make my wish come true

searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;

it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;

drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;

in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;

so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;

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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle

To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.  – Anatole France

We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown

Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil

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43 comments

rajee krishnan January 20, 2009 - 3:41 am

searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence

wat’s that?? clarify… :)

nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning

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naima February 9, 2009 - 3:34 pm

man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz

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hamdi February 19, 2009 - 9:20 pm

man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….

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aleah March 17, 2009 - 6:55 pm

wow what an amazing poem this is!!
Its very well writin indeed

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katie April 19, 2009 - 11:19 am

I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!! :)

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katie April 19, 2009 - 11:21 am

srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*

lol again u rock!!

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Lidia April 19, 2009 - 11:24 am

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

ur awesomely awesome

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Radhika May 1, 2009 - 11:12 am

The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!

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Shy May 1, 2009 - 11:13 am

That was Great poem.

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Pushpendra Pandey September 2, 2009 - 9:39 pm

nice thoughts…….

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laxmi December 9, 2009 - 1:26 pm

you are speaking just what i feel right now.
really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
i am also interested in writing poems
can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
great words….

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surbhi December 9, 2009 - 1:29 pm

truly admirable simplicity and depth……
thats what i liked most about your words..

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laxmi December 9, 2009 - 1:36 pm

greatt work….loved it
can i also drop in some poems of my own??

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Praveen December 9, 2009 - 7:52 pm

Hi,

Please send them via email.

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bunny January 6, 2010 - 3:15 am

hey u hav written vry nice poems

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Brooke January 10, 2010 - 7:07 pm

Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well

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febi March 23, 2010 - 6:11 pm

like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
thank you.

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TAMIESHA KELLY June 4, 2010 - 7:19 pm

I ENJOYED YOUR POEM..I KNOW FROM FRIST HAND ASKING FOR A WISH ALSO KNOWN AS A BLESSING….I FEEL U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART….KEEPING THE FAITH…WE HAVE TO..

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kelsie June 21, 2010 - 11:11 am

cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen

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kelsie June 21, 2010 - 11:12 am

cool:D

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beckiii July 22, 2010 - 6:18 am

i luv da poem tha much man i wont stop reading it lmaoo :)

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Bridgeeet August 17, 2010 - 3:14 am

I know the excact same thing you were going through when u wrote that cuz i am going through it right now :(

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sphoza October 7, 2010 - 5:19 am

what an amazing poem i have eva heard keep your good work!!

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Kate Loverude January 5, 2011 - 4:06 pm

Dear God, you are real! I want you to make real wishes real wishing lobster wishker real wishing starlight starbright real wishing star fairy all come to life as long! I wish Jeff Becky Kelsey Loverude police security whole people from Massachusetts nipmuc school students teachers star program seniors Danielle work study Grandma Jan Erikson and her friends Aunt Julie Olsen and her family Uncle Ted Aunt Rhonda Bakken family Ms. Curran Brittany Bakken and her husband Luke Ashely Uncle Dave and their family Uncle Mike Cal and their family will all be Gone forever til seven days! No turning back! Amen

Dear God, we are going to keep real wishes safe for tomorrow! I believe in you and real wishes as long! I wish will you change me into a thirteen-year-old younger kid and make me live inside a Disney Princess Dream House next to hotel in South Carolina with my two new good warm good kind hearted sisters Anya age thirteen and Sara age nine mermaids food drinks money movie tickets my cats Andre Winsalow all the time til seven days! No turning back! Amen

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christopher blessing February 6, 2011 - 4:39 am

this poem reminds me of my poems and am very thankful to jesus that we still have more poet like you around………..its lovely

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aishwarya February 16, 2011 - 4:58 am

vao

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megha February 28, 2011 - 5:15 am

awesome poem….

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lilly April 14, 2011 - 12:43 am

ooo wao this is an awesome poem touches my heart deep inside really love this poem……….lovely

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Callie May 6, 2011 - 11:01 pm

I have to say I have read several of your poems tonight, and they are truly fantastic. They make me enjoy the fact that I love reading poetry and writing it. All I can say is “Thank you”!!

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Logan May 23, 2011 - 3:48 pm

I’m so glad you guys like my poem! I wrote it about myself.

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short poems July 17, 2011 - 1:28 pm

Lovely poem!

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beauty July 19, 2011 - 6:03 am

awsme poem, so true so well written

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neeru August 3, 2011 - 8:54 am

really snobbish poem.. gr8 lines n awesome words.. :-)

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gaurav khurana August 4, 2011 - 12:05 am

wats d deeper meaning of first para……if u plz cud tell????

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khatoon August 10, 2011 - 11:04 am

nice poem

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Pinky August 28, 2011 - 12:54 am

Simple and profound!!

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Afmina September 2, 2011 - 10:12 am

YOU R TOOOOOO……GUD….

I LOVE DIZ POEM…

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smita January 3, 2012 - 10:02 am

how could u man ! its really awesome. i wish i could talk 2 u ,i know u will better understand me than others.my soul speaks through ur poem.i just close my eyes after reading and it seems whatever is buried deep inside my heart is floating with ur words

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vibha January 20, 2012 - 11:31 am

Man u gave me the answers i was searching for last few days..thanks

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praveen February 26, 2012 - 12:19 am

i want something new in life oterwise i lose me.

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batul2000 March 9, 2012 - 10:32 pm

awsme poem really v.deep

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santhosh June 18, 2012 - 5:23 am

:-):-):-)fine beautiful:-):-):-)

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Hiba July 15, 2012 - 3:22 pm

Wow….The writer has very good thoughts….I love the poems of this writer…:)

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