Close to my Heart

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (16) Comments  |  

disconnected from the world tonight
with my mind blank and seemingly shut tight
this emptiness that i feel all around me,
seems all the more familiar;

choking me from the inside,
my heart bundled up in my throat,
i could not say a word,
speechless, is all that i have become;

not a long left before this agony turns into ecstasy,
each day seems a bit longer than the previous one,
yet each moment that takes a eon to pass by,
makes it all worthwhile;

shivers rush up my spine
as the midnight air gently caress past,
i lay on my back and count the stars
twinkling in the moonlit sky, all alone;

why do we live
so far apart
i don’t know
but you will always be…..
Close to My Heart!!!

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  • KingOfHearts said: (Friday June 11th, 2010)

    nice poem, touching heart. ^_^

  • Anupriya said: (Sunday June 13th, 2010)

    Hello Praveen,
    just wanted to let u know, i’ve read almost all your poems and am a big fan of your poetry. very simple and beautifully expressed words and the most important thing is that they are very similar to mine. yes, i too write poems, very rarely though. would love to share them in this wonderful poetry world of yours. keep the good work going. its a real pleasure reading your poems.
    Regards,
    anu

  • Praveen said: (Monday June 14th, 2010)

    Thank you Anu. I am glad to hear that and would be great if you can share some of your poems. Would love to read them.

    Regards
    Praveen

  • Mohan said: (Sunday June 20th, 2010)

    hi praveen,

    simply superb…there is no words to express.
    as u had expressed in your poetry.
    what to tell about these poetries…………..
    Really those are heart touching.
    keep it going…

    regards.
    Mohan

  • Kar said: (Monday June 21st, 2010)

    Hi Praveen,

    Wonderful poem! heart-felt!

    -K

  • carol said: (Monday June 28th, 2010)

    i love the poem….!!!
    its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
    gr8 wrk !!!!

  • Nina said: (Sunday August 29th, 2010)

    amazing poem

  • Lovely Bushra said: (Tuesday October 5th, 2010)

    wow this is beautiful poetry

    I love these lines -

    “I may not always be here for you,
    I may not always say, ” I love you ”
    But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
    You will always be my knight in shining armor.”

  • tiara said: (Monday December 6th, 2010)

    this poem touch and i really love it god bless you never stop writting

  • mais radwan said: (Tuesday December 28th, 2010)

    it’s such a gr8 poem rly i like it …………plz don’t stop writing coz every poem u’ll write u’ll feel more better…..! <3

  • Youa said: (Tuesday December 28th, 2010)

    Lovely Poem <3

  • legnaylla said: (Saturday March 19th, 2011)

    i….ummm..perso…sorry forget it

  • yuna_vera said: (Wednesday June 8th, 2011)

    what a lovely poem….thanks..*smiles*

  • Gayatri said: (Saturday June 25th, 2011)

    hey Praveen
    i really like your poems especially the one Close To My Heart.its really amazing keep up your sprit its really a heart-touching poem

  • Kulveer Kaur said: (Thursday March 22nd, 2012)

    Really Praveen,all of poems are heart Touching.Love to Read them….

  • Praveen said: (Monday March 26th, 2012)

    Thank you.


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