Love

Close to my Heart

June 11, 2010

disconnected from the world tonight
with my mind blank and seemingly shut tight
this emptiness that i feel all around me,
seems all the more familiar;

choking me from the inside,
my heart bundled up in my throat,
i could not say a word,
speechless, is all that i have become;

not a long left before this agony turns into ecstasy,
each day seems a bit longer than the previous one,
yet each moment that takes a eon to pass by,
makes it all worthwhile;

shivers rush up my spine
as the midnight air gently caress past,
i lay on my back and count the stars
twinkling in the moonlit sky, all alone;

why do we live
so far apart
i don’t know
but you will always be…..
Close to My Heart!!!

  • KingOfHearts June 11, 2010 at 9:22 am

    nice poem, touching heart. ^_^

  • Anupriya June 13, 2010 at 4:46 am

    Hello Praveen,
    just wanted to let u know, i’ve read almost all your poems and am a big fan of your poetry. very simple and beautifully expressed words and the most important thing is that they are very similar to mine. yes, i too write poems, very rarely though. would love to share them in this wonderful poetry world of yours. keep the good work going. its a real pleasure reading your poems.
    Regards,
    anu

    • Praveen June 14, 2010 at 7:18 am

      Thank you Anu. I am glad to hear that and would be great if you can share some of your poems. Would love to read them.

      Regards
      Praveen

  • Mohan June 20, 2010 at 6:35 am

    hi praveen,

    simply superb…there is no words to express.
    as u had expressed in your poetry.
    what to tell about these poetries…………..
    Really those are heart touching.
    keep it going…

    regards.
    Mohan

  • Kar June 21, 2010 at 6:56 am

    Hi Praveen,

    Wonderful poem! heart-felt!

    -K

  • carol June 28, 2010 at 5:05 am

    i love the poem….!!!
    its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
    gr8 wrk !!!!

  • Nina August 29, 2010 at 9:36 am

    amazing poem

  • Lovely Bushra October 5, 2010 at 6:00 am

    wow this is beautiful poetry

    I love these lines –

    “I may not always be here for you,
    I may not always say, ” I love you ”
    But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
    You will always be my knight in shining armor.”

  • tiara December 6, 2010 at 10:14 am

    this poem touch and i really love it god bless you never stop writting

  • mais radwan December 28, 2010 at 12:18 pm

    it’s such a gr8 poem rly i like it …………plz don’t stop writing coz every poem u’ll write u’ll feel more better…..! <3

  • Youa December 28, 2010 at 4:09 pm

    Lovely Poem <3

  • legnaylla March 19, 2011 at 9:41 am

    i….ummm..perso…sorry forget it

  • yuna_vera June 8, 2011 at 9:54 pm

    what a lovely poem….thanks..*smiles*

  • Gayatri June 25, 2011 at 4:57 am

    hey Praveen
    i really like your poems especially the one Close To My Heart.its really amazing keep up your sprit its really a heart-touching poem

  • Kulveer Kaur March 22, 2012 at 12:59 pm

    Really Praveen,all of poems are heart Touching.Love to Read them….

    • Praveen March 26, 2012 at 11:06 pm

      Thank you.