A State of Mind

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life  |  (22) Comments  |  24,835 views

i have come a long wayA State of Mind - Voices
to a distant place far far away
from where i used to live
and from what i used to do;

Life is a rosy dream,
happiness and joy aplenty,
everything that i wanted and
everything is as i had hoped for;

Everything is as i had hoped for,
everything is as i had longed for,
everything is except for the turmoil
that plagues me inside every day;

I sleep, i smile, i laugh, i play, i eat and i live
in a constant state of fear,
a fear that i did not ask for,
and one that i did not longed for;

killing me from inside,
silently screaming for it to stop,
i am devoured by my own inner self,
day in and day out;

haunting and taunting me,
time and time again,
they run helter and skelter
in the deep recess of my mind;

it’s just a state of mind,
i tell myself
hoping to erase these thoughts
of fear that hinges on the edge of my happiness;

Trapped inside my own mind,
eclipsed by my fear,
tears weep without a choice
hoping to vanquish (flood) this struggle within;

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  • 5Rats said: (Tuesday February 8th, 2011)

    Nice poem! Welcome back to the site after a very long hiatus! :) :)

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  • Poems said: (Wednesday March 2nd, 2011)

    I can feel you,I really know how it feels. The hardest enemy to fight is ourselves and the greatest battle is not outside but within us.

    You have your way with words and was able to capture the emotions.
    Keep it up!

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  • Hana said: (Sunday March 6th, 2011)

    this describes exactly what depresion is !!

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  • Hana said: (Sunday March 6th, 2011)

    i like it

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  • kavita said: (Wednesday March 9th, 2011)

    nice poem

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  • kate said: (Wednesday March 9th, 2011)

    what is the lesson learned from that poem?

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  • Amelia Carpenter said: (Thursday March 10th, 2011)

    Wow. This is a good poem! I used it for my 7gradeth ELA+ class and my teacher absolutely loved it!! I would recomend it to all the young, creative, and artistic ppoets out there!
    Cheers! xoxo

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  • Izzy Rosair said: (Thursday March 10th, 2011)

    Hahaa this is good. (: Loved it!
    <3~Izzy.

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  • deshonena said: (Wednesday April 13th, 2011)

    i lyked dis poem very muchh nda would lyk 2 use it one day in life

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  • God's child said: (Sunday April 24th, 2011)

    This really describes what I’m going through. It’s beautifully written. :)

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  • cresil said: (Thursday April 28th, 2011)

    Words tell everything & you done well….a fear within

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  • prakash said: (Monday June 6th, 2011)

    im speechless

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  • A State of Mind « pristinefeelings said: (Wednesday June 29th, 2011)

    [...] June 29, 2011 Filed under: My Silent words — pristinefeelings @ 2:14 pm I have come a long way to a distant place far far away from where i used to live and from what i used to do; Life is a [...]

  • A State Of Mind « pristinefeelings said: (Wednesday June 29th, 2011)

    [...] I have come a long way [...]

  • Rapunzel said: (Saturday July 16th, 2011)

    Looks like you had been to the trauma of life, which has been in store for you.

    Good luck!!! I like it.

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  • Meerah said: (Saturday August 27th, 2011)

    can i use these lyrics for a song ?

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  • happiness is how mistakes get made | The Ultimate Playground said: (Sunday October 23rd, 2011)

    [...] is a rosy dream, happiness and joy aplenty, everything that i wanted and everything is as i had hoped [...]

  • sidney canada said: (Monday November 14th, 2011)

    everyday i sit and wait
    waiting for my prince
    but yet he has yet to come
    and later i sat and hensed
    i got up wipe the dirt of my dress
    and listen to the sounds in my head
    i dont need a prince
    for yet i am my own saver
    and yet to this day my prince has not come
    but i’ll worry about that later

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  • Sumitra said: (Sunday December 18th, 2011)

    It says what I feel always..

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  • Itu said: (Monday March 19th, 2012)

    Very touching indeed. Can’t sleep cause of pain

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  • Rupesh Popli said: (Thursday May 10th, 2012)

    Gud poem..though could have been felt in more lonely and dreadly way…

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  • erie morgan said: (Wednesday July 25th, 2012)

    this is a really sad and depressing one but that’s what makes it a good poem don’t you think

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