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Prisoner of Love

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just another random thought,prisoner of love
sitting in the silence
of my disturbed thoughts,
i refused to think about it;

i closed my eyes,
tried to shut it tight,
carried everywhere by the wind,
it seemed so real and so true;

gazing deeply into the pool of water,
i see my face staring back in
amazement and in wonder
at the emotions that i am overcome with;

drawing me closer and closer,
stirred by the depth of passion,
torn between the life that is
and the life that will be, i struggle;

trying to find a solution,
i try to claw my way out,
i try to fight the feelings
and all the emotions i have been overcome with;

sitting in the dark,
thinking of you,
wishing you were here,
realizing i am a prisoner of love,
a prisoner of your love;

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for a special someone

 

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13 comments

Richa March 29, 2011 - 9:35 am

Felt each word as I read, beautifully crafted! God Bless!

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MARICELLA April 1, 2011 - 1:13 pm

this is such a good poem i used for my english class and this is how i feel rite now:)

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kavita April 3, 2011 - 2:00 am

Nice one

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Rupesh Popli April 26, 2011 - 9:34 pm

its was beautifully expressed…

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Praveen kumar July 16, 2011 - 12:51 am

…such a beautiful lines..pure & great 🙂

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seph July 20, 2011 - 8:10 pm

it’s nice ,, just reflecting your self…
now, i feel good.

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ambily July 26, 2011 - 2:47 am

gud

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Praveen Sheokand September 24, 2011 - 1:02 am

such as a most beautiful lines

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mulalo November 24, 2011 - 3:40 am

wow, you’ve expressed how i am feeling rite now,

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jhoanne December 6, 2011 - 5:38 am

inspiring

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Inaboya frank February 14, 2012 - 7:33 am

I love this! It describes how i feel

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meera March 18, 2012 - 11:42 pm

superb !

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eriemorganmaples August 2, 2012 - 11:00 am

i agree with inaboya and meera on what they said about the poem it’s really good i had a great time reading it keep up the good work okay

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