Praveen Kumar setting sail on a breezy weekend together after a busy week we ventured out for good time
leaving the shores of a crazy city unreachable by the waves of modern necessities we started sharing the good and the bad
a hmm... a weary ok... another hmm... a desperate attempt to strike a conversation a desperate attempt to get you out of the weekday rut
deeper and deeper we sailed into the sea further and further we seemed to drift away (from each other) far far away from the safety of the land stuck in the same place
an uneerie silence descended on a calm and gray sea foretelling an impending storm?
sailing under the darkening sky i sit here, far away from you in the silence before the storm
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- note: this one has multiple meanings. relatively easier to understand i guess.
3 comments
i love to sail at see or on a river, sailing has been my hobby for several years already. -;-
i love to do both sailing and surfing at the same time, somehow i have this attraction to the sea~-*
i love this poem i think you did very good writing this poem