Tomorrow will be better than today

March 23, 2010

its midnight andtomorrow is a better day than today
my eyes just staring at the wall opposite
no sleep, no dreams,
i sit and watch the drama
unfolding before me;

like an empty canvas
waiting for an artist
i wait in anticipation
wondering when and wondering why;

i did all i could,
so i believe so,
what is happening is beyond my grasp
and i can only watch as a mere spectator;

a mere spectator in my own life
one moment its all the way up,
the next its hanging in balance,
the tension is nerve wracking;

patience is all i have
and patience is all that i need
as i watch the things unfold
and let things take shape at its own pace;

i waited a long time for this,
so what difference it is going to make
to wait a little bit more
but for how long should i be the villian in my own life;

i wish i could answer all the questions running in my mind,
i wish i could end all the battles being fought inside,
i wish i do not have to wait for long
i wish, i hope and i believe
(maybe) tomorrow will be better than today;

  • sophie March 25, 2010 at 1:20 pm

    this is amazing !!! i love how you wrote this. this hit home

  • john March 28, 2010 at 6:15 pm

    this is so so so good

  • savita March 31, 2010 at 1:05 am

    really its true

  • Hannah April 16, 2010 at 9:35 am

    wow,I’m looking for truth in life,and I just found it.

  • sobbanaa April 25, 2010 at 7:52 am

    a great piece of work.. i love it.. it really tells about my life..keep up your gud work

  • Shweta May 30, 2010 at 11:34 pm

    Really Awesome… if someone is telling about my life…..
    amazing…Keep it up

  • tathagata June 5, 2010 at 8:34 pm

    this poem probably published the untold part of the life…directly touch to heart if somebody reads that in the sense the poem is written..fabulous …fantastic writting

  • Sophia June 16, 2010 at 8:15 am

    It is fabulous…keep the good work:)

  • kuulkat June 26, 2010 at 9:02 pm

    yaar mast poem hai

  • sachs June 30, 2010 at 10:51 am

    wow…this is awesome….i will love to read more of your works

  • yash August 18, 2010 at 7:31 am

    ist faboulous!!!!!!!!!!!

  • nini :) September 14, 2010 at 5:35 am

    this is awesome πŸ˜€
    keep it up yo! πŸ˜‰

  • yash September 24, 2010 at 4:34 am

    love it its really true

  • Ankit September 25, 2010 at 4:32 am

    very meaningfulllllllll

  • cicillia novita October 2, 2010 at 5:05 pm

    love it so ^^

  • Julio October 18, 2010 at 10:28 pm

    Its a good one

  • DJ November 12, 2010 at 6:21 pm

    i am only 15 and i understand what your saying it tuch me. just mebe i and my family can make anther day its hard waiting.hopeing that my parents won’t ends this now.your words gave me comfrt to not quit and keep going.that i am not alone.=-)

  • charmin February 7, 2011 at 7:30 am

    hi….i totally loved ur poem…it has a soul..a meaning…i want others to know abt it too…bt since its ur work, i wont do anything without ur permission…do u mind if i publish it in my college magazine?..i wont if u dont want me to…bt seriously if u dont mind can i?

  • poetrylover July 7, 2011 at 4:46 am

    praveen u r awesome …… superlike……….:)

  • Sherin April 26, 2012 at 10:03 pm

    This is my life storyπŸ˜”I love your pome thank you πŸ˜ƒ

  • erica maples February 24, 2013 at 11:56 am

    i love that poem it speaks to me in a way that nothing else ever could, and that’s why i love it to much, thnx for writing it for us to read and enjoy