Tomorrow will be better than today

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life  |  (22) Comments  |  

its midnight andtomorrow is a better day than today
my eyes just staring at the wall opposite
no sleep, no dreams,
i sit and watch the drama
unfolding before me;

like an empty canvas
waiting for an artist
i wait in anticipation
wondering when and wondering why;

i did all i could,
so i believe so,
what is happening is beyond my grasp
and i can only watch as a mere spectator;

a mere spectator in my own life
one moment its all the way up,
the next its hanging in balance,
the tension is nerve wracking;

patience is all i have
and patience is all that i need
as i watch the things unfold
and let things take shape at its own pace;

i waited a long time for this,
so what difference it is going to make
to wait a little bit more
but for how long should i be the villian in my own life;

i wish i could answer all the questions running in my mind,
i wish i could end all the battles being fought inside,
i wish i do not have to wait for long
i wish, i hope and i believe
(maybe) tomorrow will be better than today;

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  • sophie said: (Thursday March 25th, 2010)

    this is amazing !!! i love how you wrote this. this hit home

  • john said: (Sunday March 28th, 2010)

    this is so so so good

  • savita said: (Wednesday March 31st, 2010)

    really its true

  • Hannah said: (Friday April 16th, 2010)

    wow,I’m looking for truth in life,and I just found it.

  • sobbanaa said: (Sunday April 25th, 2010)

    a great piece of work.. i love it.. it really tells about my life..keep up your gud work

  • Shweta said: (Sunday May 30th, 2010)

    Really Awesome…..as if someone is telling about my life…..
    amazing…Keep it up

  • tathagata said: (Saturday June 5th, 2010)

    this poem probably published the untold part of the life…directly touch to heart if somebody reads that in the sense the poem is written..fabulous …fantastic writting

  • Sophia said: (Wednesday June 16th, 2010)

    It is fabulous…keep the good work:)

  • kuulkat said: (Saturday June 26th, 2010)

    yaar mast poem hai

  • sachs said: (Wednesday June 30th, 2010)

    wow…this is awesome….i will love to read more of your works

  • yash said: (Wednesday August 18th, 2010)

    hi
    ist faboulous!!!!!!!!!!!

  • nini :) said: (Tuesday September 14th, 2010)

    jeeeeeeeeeeez….
    this is awesome :D
    keep it up yo! ;)

  • yash said: (Friday September 24th, 2010)

    love it its really true

  • Ankit said: (Saturday September 25th, 2010)

    very meaningfulllllllll

  • cicillia novita said: (Saturday October 2nd, 2010)

    love it so ^^

  • Julio said: (Monday October 18th, 2010)

    Its a good one

  • DJ said: (Friday November 12th, 2010)

    i am only 15 and i understand what your saying it tuch me. just mebe i and my family can make anther day its hard waiting.hopeing that my parents won’t ends this now.your words gave me comfrt to not quit and keep going.that i am not alone.=-)

  • charmin said: (Monday February 7th, 2011)

    hi….i totally loved ur poem…it has a soul..a meaning…i want others to know abt it too…bt since its ur work, i wont do anything without ur permission…do u mind if i publish it in my college magazine?..i wont if u dont want me to…bt seriously if u dont mind can i?

  • poetrylover said: (Thursday July 7th, 2011)

    praveen u r awesome …… superlike……….:)

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  • Sherin said: (Thursday April 26th, 2012)

    This is my life story😔I love your pome thank you 😃

  • erica maples said: (Sunday February 24th, 2013)

    i love that poem it speaks to me in a way that nothing else ever could, and that’s why i love it to much, thnx for writing it for us to read and enjoy


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