November 1, 2011

just you and me,
holding hands and looking into each other’s eyes,
it’s been a while,Together
it’s been a long time;

lost in this madness of life,
closer but farther away,
from each other,
i don’t know what to do;

alone and lost,
this dream is all that keeps me alive,
keeps me and you alive,
waiting for the moment it becomes a reality;

counting the days,
to meet you on the other side,
high above the world,
over and over in my mind;

i close my eyes and i see you there,
i drift away to sleep and you are there,
waiting for me to escape reality and dive
into this dream, where you and me, together;

together, till the shining sun,
together, till madness rises again,
together, we will make this dream come true,
together sooner!

  • Tapan Parmar November 2, 2011 at 11:04 pm

    Amazing..!! Just loved it..!!!

  • Purnima November 3, 2011 at 3:46 am


  • sainha November 4, 2011 at 2:24 am

    thumbs up!

  • sainha November 4, 2011 at 2:25 am

    thumbs up!
    post another poems pls.

  • Ruth November 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm

    so sweet. loved it.

  • kyle November 14, 2011 at 7:25 am

    i don`t have words for this ,
    i owe to you for this , thanks a lot .
    hope will see some more in future .

  • susan November 14, 2011 at 2:30 pm

    hi praveen! i like your it okay that i post it on my notes in facebook..hope you dont mind…thanks a lot..keep writing beautiful and meaningful poem.

    • Praveen November 16, 2011 at 8:41 pm

      Thank you. You can post it as a note, but please give the credit along with the website url.

  • Brittany Brewer December 5, 2011 at 11:29 am

    this is the best poem i read in a long time 🙂 i love this poem this is my number one poem in my book…

  • xavier December 26, 2011 at 10:00 pm

    I just read two of your poems and I’m already a fan of your work

  • hillary chua chien January 17, 2012 at 12:40 am

    tears rolle ddown my eyes as i read this poen. . . i can emphatized, it seems you are saying the emotions that i had kept inside and what i have been wanting to say. . . awesome .

  • mangotango February 23, 2012 at 6:37 am

    awesome about to cry lol 10/11

  • Eleanor April 9, 2012 at 10:26 pm

    i love this poem i really felt the sadness and the hope!! 🙂

  • Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren July 13, 2012 at 4:40 am

    lovely! you definitely did a good job on this one! 🙂 ~

  • erica maples March 26, 2013 at 2:25 pm

    i love that poem it has so-much life and love to it