Together

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (15) Comments  |  15,216 views

just you and me,
holding hands and looking into each other’s eyes,
it’s been a while,Together
it’s been a long time;

lost in this madness of life,
closer but farther away,
from each other,
i don’t know what to do;

alone and lost,
this dream is all that keeps me alive,
keeps me and you alive,
waiting for the moment it becomes a reality;

counting the days,
to meet you on the other side,
high above the world,
over and over in my mind;

i close my eyes and i see you there,
i drift away to sleep and you are there,
waiting for me to escape reality and dive
into this dream, where you and me, together;

together, till the shining sun,
together, till madness rises again,
together, we will make this dream come true,
together sooner!

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  • Tapan Parmar said: (Wednesday November 2nd, 2011)

    Amazing..!! Just loved it..!!!

  • Purnima said: (Thursday November 3rd, 2011)

    Beautiful!

  • sainha said: (Friday November 4th, 2011)

    nice:)
    thumbs up!

  • sainha said: (Friday November 4th, 2011)

    nice:)
    thumbs up!
    post another poems pls.

  • Ruth said: (Thursday November 10th, 2011)

    so sweet. loved it.

  • kyle said: (Monday November 14th, 2011)

    i don`t have words for this ,
    i owe to you for this , thanks a lot .
    hope will see some more in future .

  • susan said: (Monday November 14th, 2011)

    hi praveen! i like your poem..is it okay that i post it on my notes in facebook..hope you dont mind…thanks a lot..keep writing beautiful and meaningful poem.

  • Praveen said: (Wednesday November 16th, 2011)

    Thank you. You can post it as a note, but please give the credit along with the website url.

  • Brittany Brewer said: (Monday December 5th, 2011)

    this is the best poem i read in a long time :) i love this poem this is my number one poem in my book…

  • xavier said: (Monday December 26th, 2011)

    I just read two of your poems and I’m already a fan of your work

  • hillary chua chien said: (Tuesday January 17th, 2012)

    tears rolle ddown my eyes as i read this poen. . . i can emphatized, it seems you are saying the emotions that i had kept inside and what i have been wanting to say. . . awesome .

  • mangotango said: (Thursday February 23rd, 2012)

    awesome about to cry lol 10/11

  • Eleanor said: (Monday April 9th, 2012)

    i love this poem i really felt the sadness and the hope!! :)

  • Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren said: (Friday July 13th, 2012)

    lovely! you definitely did a good job on this one! :) ~

  • erica maples said: (Tuesday March 26th, 2013)

    i love that poem it has so-much life and love to it


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