Teardrops

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life, Sadness  |  (3) Comments  |  5,403 views

a thousand tears i cried
over the last few days
what was once a dry(gentle) riverbed
transformed into a wild river overnight
with each passing moment
and each passing hour
with the clock slowly ticking away
the tears just continue unabated
a thousand gallons of teardrop
gently caress the feet of those nearby
yet no one moved an inch
a teardrop a second
slowly squeezing the life out of me
slowly putting an end to this wretched existence
a river that was once dormant (gentle)
now surges on
inside me
a river of teardrops
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note:
inspired by an incident i was told and in someways related to me as well :)

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  • samantha said: (Tuesday September 15th, 2009)

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  • nyidon said: (Thursday October 1st, 2009)

    i liked yr poems very much.i myself love to write poems.

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  • nyidon said: (Thursday October 1st, 2009)

    i liked your poems very much coz i as a student i love to write poems. i have written 30poems but i don’t publish them.

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