Raindrops

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life, Sadness  |  (7) Comments  |  

here i am – happy and sad,
lonely and confused,
my life’s boring phase has just started,
i am almost there yet i am not even close;

Raindropsas i put my face against the window,
sitting and watching the dark, pregnant clouds,
it feels as though the skies are shedding tears on me,
as the raindrops fall gently to the ground;

it’s funny how life goes,
up, up and up one day,
down, down and deep down the next,
like a roller coaster;

i often wish that life would treat me
with a little bit more respect, but here i am,
being tossed around like a
monkey in a circus;

as the raindrops turn into a downpour,
they seem to wash away my tears, my pain,
and drenching me from head to toe,
bringing a sense of optimism to a bruised and battered soul;

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  • erie morgan said: (Friday August 3rd, 2012)

    i love this one really i do

  • rashmi said: (Saturday August 4th, 2012)

    touching…!!

  • Rupesh Popli said: (Monday August 6th, 2012)

    Beautifully expressed…very motivating…and heart felt.. :)

  • eriemorganmaples said: (Tuesday August 7th, 2012)

    i would agree with you two about the poem

  • Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren said: (Tuesday August 28th, 2012)

    Very nice poem! I can really feel the emotions you expressed here, I like it so much.~

  • birinthadevi said: (Wednesday September 12th, 2012)

    i love the poem!!!
    its poem touch my heart so much
    i feel the emotion!
    i like too!
    very nice poem…..

  • eriemorganmaples said: (Sunday October 7th, 2012)

    i would agree with you birinhadevi


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