Sadness

Alone

January 10, 2012

the sound of silence grows,
every minute feels like a hour,
every hour feels like a day,
as i sit in in the cold light of morning;

its far too late, too lateAlone in the Crowd
to pick up my heart from the floor,
as it lay in pieces,
right where you threw it yesterday night;

little by little,
strangers became friends,
friends became lovers,
and suddenly, lovers became strangers;

i am lying here,
lying next to where you left me in pieces,
can’t move, can’t scream,
with only silence for company;

the tick tock of the clock and,
the beat of my heart grows louder and louder,
shrouded by a mystery,
i feel so alone;

as the melody of love fades into the distance,
the screams of silence is all that remains,
lost in the shadows of life,
i am here, Alone, in a crowded room!

———————————————————————————————–
image credit: http://yasir82.deviantart.com/art/Alone-in-the-Crowd-147238216
————————————————————————————————

  • rashmi singh January 10, 2012 at 3:40 am

    In one sentences –“it’s heart-touching…!!”

  • brandon January 10, 2012 at 7:59 am

    Excellent

  • Claudia January 17, 2012 at 6:17 pm

    I love this poem. I read it to my friend and she started crying.

    LOVE THIS POEM!!!

  • roma January 21, 2012 at 3:07 pm

    as usual i like ur poems a lot,it isn’t me who read it, its she,” my simple soul.” nice and meaningful poem filled with emotion,sense and soltidude……i like it……

    • Praveen January 31, 2012 at 9:41 pm

      Thank you Roma.

  • Roger January 23, 2012 at 7:48 pm

    Great poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.

    • Praveen January 31, 2012 at 9:40 pm

      Thank you Roger.

  • Elvirah January 29, 2012 at 1:12 am

    Very beautiful explantaion of the word ‘Alone’ caused by separation from a person who was the love of the life. Loneliness really kills sometimes and we feel like screaming aloud even if we are surrounded by huge crowd.

    • Praveen January 31, 2012 at 9:39 pm

      Thank you Elvirah.

  • You Wrote My Heart January 29, 2012 at 10:46 pm

    You managed to write exactly what my heart has been bleeding.

  • jenny January 30, 2012 at 5:18 pm

    this whole poem is the best i ever read in my life, great desripction, i know how it feel and awsome poem, hope you make more great poems

    • Praveen January 31, 2012 at 9:37 pm

      Thank you Jenny.

  • Ranu February 2, 2012 at 6:06 am

    Hi, I don’t know who u r?? But i know u through your poems. And i don’t feel any kind of hesitation to say this, ‘I want to kiss your hands’. Your poems….. i m speechless for that. I m so touched, i can only feel it and sometimes extreme feelings can’t be expressed in words. It is possible only when one is good poet like u, i m not. Good bless u.

    • Praveen February 2, 2012 at 7:10 am

      Thank you Ranu.

  • Ranu February 2, 2012 at 6:52 am

    Hello Sir, Can u pls do me a favor? I really wanted to know in which city do u live? Answer this question pls pls plsssss…. It’s request. Pls.

    • Praveen February 2, 2012 at 7:10 am

      I am from Chennai, India.

  • Ranu February 2, 2012 at 10:32 am

    Chennai????? Oh! I thought u would be somewhere from north, its just because your name is like that. Its ok whatever. Thank u so much for your reply. I m really glad. Tack care. 🙂

  • Benny February 3, 2012 at 5:58 am

    Great poem !

  • Heather February 6, 2012 at 12:38 pm

    I love this poem, i write poems too, and i been reading alot of poems, but this has to be one of my favorites, good job!

    • Praveen February 7, 2012 at 4:56 am

      Thank you Heather.

  • Heather February 7, 2012 at 1:08 pm

    One of the poems i wrote was called Love. It goes like this,
    You love one person, but you also love another person, soon you’ll find yourself in a situation where you love 10 different people. Out of the 10 people is the person you love and churish the most, the question is, who is it?

  • Ashitha Nair February 9, 2012 at 11:28 pm

    It went straight to the heart…I dont know how..but i could so strongly relate to it…
    awesome words!!!!

    • Praveen February 11, 2012 at 9:41 am

      Thank you Ashitha.

  • parveen February 10, 2012 at 10:51 pm

    PRAVEEN really so nice poem , keep it up.

    • Praveen February 11, 2012 at 9:40 am

      Thank you.

  • Heather February 11, 2012 at 2:05 pm

    I wrote alot more. For some reason i can only write poems when i’m depress. Is that normal?

  • Kate February 18, 2012 at 2:28 pm

    Love this poem very much<3 It has a lot of meaning in every word that is listed. Keep it up and do what you are doing best. Hope to see more poems from you.

    • Praveen March 1, 2012 at 6:33 am

      Thank Kate.

  • kabita March 3, 2012 at 8:40 pm

    waooo….nice poem…

  • sherry March 8, 2012 at 9:33 pm

    when i read it,i cried out loud infront of d screen..that all my sorrows just flowed with every drops of it..i luv d poem if i say honestly,i lluuvv it.

  • batul2000 March 10, 2012 at 12:04 am

    one word 2 describe “fabulous”

  • kavita March 11, 2012 at 2:18 am

    Little by little, stranger become friend,and friend become lover and then stranger..nice line and TRUE..thanks for sharing your thoughts.
    I searched you two years long ago…thought whom I m searching you are same..same name confused me. same state confused me..but now I m glad I found u 🙂

  • Pierre March 12, 2012 at 5:27 pm

    i have to give it to you, this one is amazing! full of emotion, full of soul, and full of meaning. just awesome!

  • karl March 15, 2012 at 9:16 pm

    its so very nice,,,
    it seems my heart gets crumpled when i read this poem,,
    thanks

  • Marissa W. March 24, 2012 at 5:47 am

    I can relate to this wonderful poem,it has spoken to me on another level of life thank you for enlightening us with these amazing words.

    • Praveen March 26, 2012 at 11:04 pm

      Thank you Marissa.

  • Alexis April 5, 2012 at 7:12 pm

    This is a very great poem I like it:-)

  • nancy walter April 15, 2012 at 5:05 pm

    I too write poems and music lyrics instead of screaming for help when the walls fall in around me. It’s a process of loss and trying to move foreward when the world looks at you as a magnet of strength and endurance. I hide in my poems and cover the darkness with fine words and silent dred that tomorrow is another day.

  • saleena April 19, 2012 at 4:04 am

    really good… but have to do imaginery words to it.. then also nice… touchihng also… we all feel like this like alone or solitude in crowd… is it… because we are different from others … take care bye.. and keep writing good….

  • kathy lulas April 23, 2012 at 3:41 am

    i’am the person who is same as this poem

  • Rupesh Popli May 22, 2012 at 12:19 am

    little by little,
    strangers became friends,
    friends became lovers,
    and suddenly, lovers became strangers

    Great man…shows numbness/mess/noises in life…great life…

  • Rupesh Popli May 22, 2012 at 12:21 am

    Sorry for above comment..i did not mean…great life…I meant great lines..

  • varun partap. June 24, 2012 at 1:58 pm

    Superb frin…

  • gege ramon September 9, 2012 at 9:28 am

    wow you are an amazing writer!