Alone

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Sadness  |  (44) Comments  |  

the sound of silence grows,
every minute feels like a hour,
every hour feels like a day,
as i sit in in the cold light of morning;

its far too late, too lateAlone in the Crowd
to pick up my heart from the floor,
as it lay in pieces,
right where you threw it yesterday night;

little by little,
strangers became friends,
friends became lovers,
and suddenly, lovers became strangers;

i am lying here,
lying next to where you left me in pieces,
can’t move, can’t scream,
with only silence for company;

the tick tock of the clock and,
the beat of my heart grows louder and louder,
shrouded by a mystery,
i feel so alone;

as the melody of love fades into the distance,
the screams of silence is all that remains,
lost in the shadows of life,
i am here, Alone, in a crowded room!

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  • rashmi singh said: (Tuesday January 10th, 2012)

    In one sentences –”it’s heart-touching…!!”

  • brandon said: (Tuesday January 10th, 2012)

    Excellent

  • Claudia said: (Tuesday January 17th, 2012)

    I love this poem. I read it to my friend and she started crying.

    LOVE THIS POEM!!!

  • roma said: (Saturday January 21st, 2012)

    as usual i like ur poems a lot,it isn’t me who read it, its she,” my simple soul.” nice and meaningful poem filled with emotion,sense and soltidude……i like it……

  • Roger said: (Monday January 23rd, 2012)

    Great poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.

  • Elvirah said: (Sunday January 29th, 2012)

    Very beautiful explantaion of the word ‘Alone’ caused by separation from a person who was the love of the life. Loneliness really kills sometimes and we feel like screaming aloud even if we are surrounded by huge crowd.

  • You Wrote My Heart said: (Sunday January 29th, 2012)

    You managed to write exactly what my heart has been bleeding.

  • jenny said: (Monday January 30th, 2012)

    this whole poem is the best i ever read in my life, great desripction, i know how it feel and awsome poem, hope you make more great poems

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    Thank you Jenny.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    Thank you Elvirah.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    Thank you Roger.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    Thank you Roma.

  • Ranu said: (Thursday February 2nd, 2012)

    Hi, I don’t know who u r?? But i know u through your poems. And i don’t feel any kind of hesitation to say this, ‘I want to kiss your hands’. Your poems….. i m speechless for that. I m so touched, i can only feel it and sometimes extreme feelings can’t be expressed in words. It is possible only when one is good poet like u, i m not. Good bless u.

  • Ranu said: (Thursday February 2nd, 2012)

    Hello Sir, Can u pls do me a favor? I really wanted to know in which city do u live? Answer this question pls pls plsssss…. It’s request. Pls.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday February 2nd, 2012)

    Thank you Ranu.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday February 2nd, 2012)

    I am from Chennai, India.

  • Ranu said: (Thursday February 2nd, 2012)

    Chennai????? Oh! I thought u would be somewhere from north, its just because your name is like that. Its ok whatever. Thank u so much for your reply. I m really glad. Tack care. :)

  • Benny said: (Friday February 3rd, 2012)

    Great poem !

  • Heather said: (Monday February 6th, 2012)

    I love this poem, i write poems too, and i been reading alot of poems, but this has to be one of my favorites, good job!

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    Thank you Heather.

  • Heather said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    One of the poems i wrote was called Love. It goes like this,
    You love one person, but you also love another person, soon you’ll find yourself in a situation where you love 10 different people. Out of the 10 people is the person you love and churish the most, the question is, who is it?

  • Ashitha Nair said: (Thursday February 9th, 2012)

    It went straight to the heart…I dont know how..but i could so strongly relate to it…
    awesome words!!!!

  • parveen said: (Friday February 10th, 2012)

    PRAVEEN really so nice poem , keep it up.

  • Praveen said: (Saturday February 11th, 2012)

    Thank you.

  • Praveen said: (Saturday February 11th, 2012)

    Thank you Ashitha.

  • Heather said: (Saturday February 11th, 2012)

    I wrote alot more. For some reason i can only write poems when i’m depress. Is that normal?

  • Kate said: (Saturday February 18th, 2012)

    Love this poem very much<3 It has a lot of meaning in every word that is listed. Keep it up and do what you are doing best. Hope to see more poems from you.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday March 1st, 2012)

    Thank Kate.

  • kabita said: (Saturday March 3rd, 2012)

    waooo….nice poem…

  • sherry said: (Thursday March 8th, 2012)

    when i read it,i cried out loud infront of d screen..that all my sorrows just flowed with every drops of it..i luv d poem if i say honestly,i lluuvv it.

  • batul2000 said: (Saturday March 10th, 2012)

    one word 2 describe “fabulous”

  • kavita said: (Sunday March 11th, 2012)

    Little by little, stranger become friend,and friend become lover and then stranger..nice line and TRUE..thanks for sharing your thoughts.
    I searched you two years long ago…thought whom I m searching you are same..same name confused me. same state confused me..but now I m glad I found u :)

  • Pierre said: (Monday March 12th, 2012)

    i have to give it to you, this one is amazing! full of emotion, full of soul, and full of meaning. just awesome!

  • karl said: (Thursday March 15th, 2012)

    its so very nice,,,
    it seems my heart gets crumpled when i read this poem,,
    thanks

  • Marissa W. said: (Saturday March 24th, 2012)

    I can relate to this wonderful poem,it has spoken to me on another level of life thank you for enlightening us with these amazing words.

  • Praveen said: (Monday March 26th, 2012)

    Thank you Marissa.

  • Alexis said: (Thursday April 5th, 2012)

    This is a very great poem I like it:-)

  • nancy walter said: (Sunday April 15th, 2012)

    I too write poems and music lyrics instead of screaming for help when the walls fall in around me. It’s a process of loss and trying to move foreward when the world looks at you as a magnet of strength and endurance. I hide in my poems and cover the darkness with fine words and silent dred that tomorrow is another day.

  • saleena said: (Thursday April 19th, 2012)

    really good… but have to do imaginery words to it.. then also nice… touchihng also… we all feel like this like alone or solitude in crowd… is it… because we are different from others … take care bye.. and keep writing good….

  • kathy lulas said: (Monday April 23rd, 2012)

    i’am the person who is same as this poem

  • Rupesh Popli said: (Tuesday May 22nd, 2012)

    little by little,
    strangers became friends,
    friends became lovers,
    and suddenly, lovers became strangers

    Great man…shows numbness/mess/noises in life…great life…

  • Rupesh Popli said: (Tuesday May 22nd, 2012)

    Sorry for above comment..i did not mean…great life…I meant great lines..

  • varun partap. said: (Sunday June 24th, 2012)

    Superb frin…

  • gege ramon said: (Sunday September 9th, 2012)

    wow you are an amazing writer!


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