I am supposed to be happy,
on the brink of something new,
exciting and life changing,
a moment of unprecedented magnitude;
but here i am sulking,
sad, angry and confused,
it's as if happiness and sadness
are waging a pitched battle in my mind;
i sat watching, numb, cold and powerless,
as my spirit tried desperately to broker peace,
i feel like i am trapped,
stuck in the middle;
scared inside, the pain refuses to let go,
as my world comes crashing down from within,
i try desperately to claw my way back in,
for one more attempt at life;
…… wow u write really well!! i love it when u write poems, sometimes it defines my life and thats the best part!! keep going… u are doing it well!! 🙂
Gud one…but could have been deeper..
Beautiful.
hello…mr.praveen…ur poems were awesome…vry expressive..pursuasive… a still deeper expression can give more life to ur poem…u r doing well…
When I read the poem I felt as if my thoughts are pouring down in words..gud one
i thought that one was very dark and inspiring to read
i love it it’s very dark and tht’s what i love about the poem
It appears we have something in common. Your writings are really inspirational.