Life Poems

Waiting for the Sun

Waiting for the Sun
Sitting in the dark of the night, in the midst of loneliness, reminiscing over memories of the days gone by;
i used to frolic around, freely and without a worry, i used chase my dreams until the end;
now every second of my life, is spent battling the demons, trying to shed and escape from the shackles that life has thrown over me;
my world feels like its falling apart, as darkness roams freely within my mind, my tears of joy has now turned into tears of despair trapped in this mortal existence;
lying in the dark of the night, waiting for the sun (light), waiting for my chance to be free (once again), i am waiting and hoping;
i look up at the dark sky, filled with the stars and moon, for a sign, desperately longing for a glimmer of light in this darkened world of mine;
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image by GeoArcus

6 comments

Bernie January 11, 2016 - 7:09 am

Thank you for the thought on coming up with such poem. Insightful poem. Hope to see more. All the best. Can I get the permission to use this poem of yours?

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Praveen Kumar
Praveen Kumar January 18, 2016 - 4:17 pm

Thank you. Please let me know where you are planning to use this poem. As long as you give the full credit with a link back to this website, i think it should be ok.

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Utsav Atre February 1, 2016 - 11:31 pm

You owned it man! Amazing poem!

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natalie March 30, 2016 - 4:07 pm

This is amazing you captured a feeling i could not explain a feeling one could feel but the resentment of the pain i am srry you must feel but i thank you

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Denise April 29, 2016 - 8:39 pm

Thank you so much for explaining an unexplainable feeling. Absolutely awesome poem.

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Todd Twitchell May 7, 2016 - 1:38 am

Thanks for the inspiration! Hey, hang in there, great things are coming!

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