some days i want to live
some days i wish it’s over
some days i long to see
some days i wait to die;
some days i think i am fine
some days i believe i have a problem
some days i am strong
some days i am weak;
some days i am closer to truth
some days it seems far far away
some days i think i understand
some days i am just lost;
some days i just wish
everything would disappear
some days i just hope
you could be near;
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“Many of the great achievements of the world were accomplished by tired and discouraged men who kept on working.” ~Author Unknown
“What seems to us as bitter trials are often blessings in disguise” ~Author Unknown
Hope begins in the dark, the stubborn hope that if you just show up and try to do the right thing, the dawn will come. ~Anne Lamott
Hope is putting faith to work when doubting would be easier. ~Author Unknown
hey….nice poem……..sometimes even i feel the same!!!!!!!
nicely put
its a lovely poem..
re-read it…yes, it is! 🙂
wow….i liked it…as all these different kinda feelings..often come 2 my mind the same way,u described….keep it up.
Kind of reminds me of the one I wrote called ‘I have many faces’
Dis Poem Reflects my life…!!! 😉
HEY! Praveen u can do better than that! I think u were pretty depresed at the time u wrote this poem . I do the same! SO hope to see some livelier poems from u .
superb yaar…..
wat an imagination…….
brilliant!
i want to shout it out very warm!!!
its a sweet n lovely poem!
it mostly describes everyone’s views and thoughts about there life!
Its so brilliant, alive and real. I like it and it relates to everyone.
Its so so so brilliant
i can also write in same manner …………………..
need help …
short and sweet
Somehow…now only after reading your poem…I can tell..its by you…u r great with words dude….
Its a nice poem, describes all kind of situations in life. Great words
superb:)
awesome poem i love to read your poem please i personally request to you do not stop to wright
nice poem i love to reak your poem
Thank you.
Thank you Sanjana.
Some day all will account for the life given us !!!!!!!!
really luv dis poem i can relate it wid my own lyf
gr8 work
awsme
Really beautiful poem. I feel the same way.
Thank you.