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Come Closer

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Couple Dancing
pushing my way past the hordes
i walk inside the restaurant
under a hazy spell
of shock and awe
 
less than 24 hours ago
we were strangers
walking the path
we created for ourselves
 
one brief look
one little smile
my world was turned upside down
in one single moment
 
love at first sight
i never believed
until the moment
i saw you watching me!
 
as i stood there
in the dim light of the restaurant
bathed in her radiance
she shines like a star
 
under her spell
unable to pull myself away
turning up the music
and switching off the lights
i whisper “come closer”
 
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16 comments

blindwreck July 28, 2008 - 11:11 pm

Again??? :O

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Praveen July 28, 2008 - 11:12 pm

again?

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blindwreck July 28, 2008 - 11:22 pm

you want her so close?? again?? 😛

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Praveen July 28, 2008 - 11:42 pm

want her close.. yeah.

again??? i have not said close before 😉

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blindwreck July 29, 2008 - 12:20 am

“pull your close and hold you near!” from your previous poem!!!!!! 😉

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 12:24 am

hehehehe…
different meaning, diff context 😉

there, i want to.

now come close 😉

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Raji Krishnan July 29, 2008 - 12:25 am

hmmm… so some girl at a restaurant.. love at first sight!!

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Raji Krishnan July 29, 2008 - 12:26 am

i understand now.. it must be sophizz you met at marina inn… got you!! 😀

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blindwreck July 29, 2008 - 12:31 am

:O so then two girls??? diff context diff meaning… kya ho raha hai, haan??? 😛 😉

so what’s next??? 😛 😀
first you wanted to.. now close… next??? for some dumb reason i’m reminded of poetbittersweet’s latest poem!! 😀 😉

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 12:43 am

adipavi’s

it is def not sophizz. thank you very much 🙂

and it is def not two girls.

diff context meaning, first poem was written with a diff scenario. this one diff scenario.

same girl, but diff scenarios. diff emotions.. thats all.

oh… poetbittersweet’s latest poem??? thats bad.. i havent read his latest poem. so i cant do anything..
this is not related to it anways; )

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Raji Krishnan July 29, 2008 - 12:54 am

ha ha.. 🙂 dont get pissed off.. was just kidding.. only to get the truth out of you!! knew its the same girl in two different scenarios in the first read..

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 12:55 am

lol..dont worry.. get the truth out!!

hahahaha…..

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blindwreck July 29, 2008 - 1:01 am

phew! so much of emotional burst already?? my my… 😛

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 1:02 am

yeah, i know..

too much la?

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blindwreck July 29, 2008 - 1:07 am

bask on… bask on my friend!
the day is yours! 😉

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 1:09 am

hahahaha…

thank you 😉

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