Love Poems

Come Closer

Come Closer
pushing my way past the hordes i walk inside the restaurant under a hazy spell of shock and awe   less than 24 hours ago we were strangers walking the path we created for ourselves   one brief look one little smile my world was turned upside down in one single moment   love at first sight i never believed until the moment i saw you watching me!   as i stood there in the dim light of the restaurant bathed in her radiance she shines like a star   under her spell unable to pull myself away turning up the music and switching off the lights i whisper "come closer"   ------------------------------------------------- image courtesy google

16 comments on "Come Closer"

  1. hehehehe…
    different meaning, diff context 😉

    there, i want to.

    now come close 😉

  2. i understand now.. it must be sophizz you met at marina inn… got you!! 😀

  3. :O so then two girls??? diff context diff meaning… kya ho raha hai, haan??? 😛 😉

    so what’s next??? 😛 😀
    first you wanted to.. now close… next??? for some dumb reason i’m reminded of poetbittersweet’s latest poem!! 😀 😉

  4. adipavi’s

    it is def not sophizz. thank you very much 🙂

    and it is def not two girls.

    diff context meaning, first poem was written with a diff scenario. this one diff scenario.

    same girl, but diff scenarios. diff emotions.. thats all.

    oh… poetbittersweet’s latest poem??? thats bad.. i havent read his latest poem. so i cant do anything..
    this is not related to it anways; )

  5. ha ha.. 🙂 dont get pissed off.. was just kidding.. only to get the truth out of you!! knew its the same girl in two different scenarios in the first read..

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