Love Poems

Can you feel it?

Can you feel it?
i have been wondering how in one single day i started thinking only about you
how do you describe a feeling? words run away from me things that i only dreamt of only witnessed in movies
things when others used to say i scoffed at them for being fools but just like a hurricane you came and swept me off my feet
it's been a while emotions long put away in vaults of steel now slowly forcing its way out
you got me hypnotised you got my heart beating like a comet faster and faster with each moment i never felt this way
let me break the ice allow me to hold you in my arms walking the offbeat path let us bask in love and live life together
no more wondering why no more living life in dreams let me hold you close girl, can you feel it?

5 comments

blindwreck July 29, 2008 - 3:15 am

Mammamia!!! This one’s awesommee. Methinks its best to leave you in solitude to enjoy your moments! Happy for you man! 🙂

“no more wondering why
no more living life in dreams
let me hold you close
girl, can you feel it?”

These lines are killer!!

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 4:07 am

Thank you 🙂

Glad you liked this 🙂

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Raji Krishnan July 29, 2008 - 4:30 am

you have taken a completely different style of writing.. wonder what inspired you!! that’s a goody goody one!! i can’t choose the best lines.. loved the poem on the whole..kudos!

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Praveen July 29, 2008 - 6:48 pm

Thank you 🙂

Glad you liked it 😉

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Farheen October 20, 2009 - 5:21 am

woow its beautiful…..

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