The shattering of my heart when you said goodbye Is like the waves of the ocean crashing against the rocks.....
I stood there in the doorway Begging you not you leave, But you looked at me and said nothing.
Your silence shot through my body Strait through my heart heart Right to my soul, I was taken aback.
It was hard for me to breathe, I choked on my own words, It was like I was dying.
All I could do was stand there with tears in my eyes And watch the very thing I tried so hard to build up Come crashing down on top of my head.
Can't you see what this is doing to me? It breaks my heart that you can stand there and not say a word. No explintations, no reasoning, nothing.
My body is shaking from the core within And I'm sick to my stomach. I can't make sense of all this, and the more I try, the weaker I get.
You finally look me in my face I notice you can't look me in my eye. I want you to tell me everything will be fine.
I want to know everything will be go back to the way it was. I want to know that you love me and won't leave me, but tthe look of your face says different.
The look on your face says it's all over The look in your eyes says you want out. The way you move says that you don't love me anymore.
My heart is breaking and I want to die. You walk to me and kiss me on the cheek and walk out the door. You're gone like that., without a word.
As you shut the door, I walk to the couch and lay down. I lay on the couch where we first kissed. I ball up like a baby and die from a broken heart.
23 comments
This is a really good it’s says it all
nice one…i loved it…
very heartful & tearful emotion. It filledup my heart
it was really a touching poem…
i just loved it…
wen i read this i started cryin cuz it reminded me of the pain for my ex
IT was a awesome poem..It happened with me too……Think i am not alone
that was so deep..iloved it. i know how it feels to be brokenhearted..</3
Now i know that i have to keep a space just in case it comes around.
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awesomeeeeeeeeee
very good. I write poems too but not as good as this
Brought back so many old feelings. So hard to see someone just walk away as if there was nothing,
Stunning poem!!!
this is exactly wat just happened to me a couple hours ago..it hurts really bad but i guess its life..
This Poem is too raw and real!! I cried when I read it as this is how I feel right now.
your poem pains me a lot and stings my heart icried bitterly while i was reading it cause i remembered what happened with me.however,its a nice saddy poem.
I love this poem! its kind of what happend to me except i loved this boy for over a year gave him everything and i was cring one nigh because he said alot of hurtful things and he laughed in my face and still to this day cant look me in the eye or say anything to me.
i love it liki mine,,,,
wow…..that was really deep…
Exactly what i went through,very touching.I could have died especially that i was pregnant but Christ protected me,really was and Hes always by my side.
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awwww this is sad:(
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beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it!!