Love

True Love

January 31, 2010

No matter how far the distance,
No matter how tired and busy we are,
No matter how much time will it take,
Honey, I’ll wait for you for our love sake.

I may not always be here for you,
I may not always say, ” I love you ”
But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
You will always be my knight in shining armor.

There will always be trials and struggles in the road of life.
There will always be songs sang out of tune.
There will always be poems written and unread.
Honey, your love will always find me waiting even in my deathbed.

  • selimcan aksoz February 1, 2010 at 3:11 am

    When you are in love this means you will be in love forever no matter how much the girl or boy say i hate you u still love her or him and maybe he or she doesn’t want to say i love you.So you tell her or him i love u wont die u just need to say i love you thats all don’t take like 1 hour only 1 minute is enough for you all just say this you will be happy forever if she or he says yes.But if she or he says no.You still can find many boys or girls =)

    Made By:Selimcan Aksoz

  • selimcan aksoz February 1, 2010 at 4:03 am

    how would you know if he really love you?it’s when you scream he’s calm,when you slap him,he kiss you,when you cry,he hug you,when you tell he you hate him,he talk you he love you

    Made By:Selim and Yuki

  • Rajesh February 1, 2010 at 6:07 am

    this is a lovely heart touching poem

  • steve February 1, 2010 at 6:15 am

    wow this is beautiful poetry

    I love these lines –

    “I may not always be here for you,
    I may not always say, ” I love you ”
    But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
    You will always be my knight in shining armor.”

  • angel February 1, 2010 at 7:22 am

    Selim-thanx for the comment and Im sure u know what I mean of True Love. As the last line says>>> “Honey, your love will always find me waiting even in my deathbed.” It means that the person in love is patiently waiting for her/his love even in sickness or bedridden situation. No amount of money can take away the love that he/she felt for her/his love one. And its different when u say that, u can still find other guys or gals-true love is not that easy to forget.

    Thank u again for the visit and comments.

  • angel February 1, 2010 at 7:25 am

    Rajesh- thank for the sweet comment. Love is something that u cant ignore in many ways. It shows no matter how you keep it.

    Take care and God bless.

  • angel February 1, 2010 at 7:28 am

    Steve- Will u be my knight in shining armor? Wish there are still prince and princess who are willing to fight for there love despite all odds! But prince and princess are just good in fairy tales. Thank u that u like my poem. Take care and God bless.

  • ramzi February 1, 2010 at 8:40 am

    this is very cool

  • Fatima Jakoet February 1, 2010 at 10:57 am

    What a treasure! You manage to bring across the purity and innocence of love so beautifully!

  • lonely_no_more February 6, 2010 at 9:12 am

    This is a very nice poem. Same as what i wanted to tell to someone i care about so much.

  • angel February 7, 2010 at 4:37 pm

    Ramzi- thank u for reading my poem and for the sweet comment. Wish u will read my other poem,”We Belong” and the coming more poems I have submitted already.

  • angel February 7, 2010 at 4:45 pm

    Fatima- Im inspired to write more poems because of you guys who appreciates my work with your nice comments. Thank u for your time reading this poem. God bless.

  • angel February 7, 2010 at 4:49 pm

    Lonely_no_more- Im so glad to hear from you that, I have expressed what you wanted to tell for the love of your life. Im hoping that you will read my other poem,”We Belong” and the coming more poems I wish to submit.

    Thank u for reading and for the nice comment. God bless.

  • selimcan aksoz February 9, 2010 at 12:42 am

    thx for the comments as well thank u all soooo much 😀

  • huzaif February 23, 2010 at 6:43 am

    Although the topic is commonplace yet the poem’s treatment is novel in that it places the relationship within the ostensibly modern panaoramam of ever diminishing space and time for our loved ones. The poem reminds me of Spenser who wrote:
    Where, whenas Death shall all the world subdue,
    Our love shall live and later life renew.

  • angel February 26, 2010 at 2:37 pm

    Huzaif- I am so glad to read your comments and sharing some lines comparative to some lines in my poem. I believe that- Love has its own language that only lovers understand regardless of creed and race. Even in dying, there’s art of love, waiting for a love one in her deathbed. Thats what love can do to one’s life.

    Thank u for reading and commenting.

  • Romee March 16, 2010 at 12:37 am

    wowww….its just too gudd….i cn say tht ur pure and senstive…may u get ur knight soon !!

    and ya…i loved mine so pure n strong tht despite her nt reciprocating and then diying…she had to fall in love with me and she did and so communicated after passing away…my love was finally recvd and accepted.

    thats da power of True Love !!

  • myownverse April 19, 2010 at 10:13 am

    this love poem, though sweet in nature is kind of a one sided sword that only the person feeling this emotion will die from, its like love is determined by the amount of heartbreak you feel when such love is being challenged by the person you love. can be super devastating BUT lead to even better lost love poetry =] no doubt though, feeling the emotion of love is the most beautiful thing, worthy of words that are not even invented yet.

  • angel May 15, 2010 at 8:34 am

    Romee- Im sorry for the delayed reply to ur comments. Just been busy with so many things that I seldom come online. Anyway, Thank u for the nice words regarding the poem. With regards to the knight, Im not looking anymore. The poem were just the feelings or imagination of the past memories I have with that knight, but now that knight is gone already for good. And Im happy that the knight is happy also.

    Take care always and thank u for ur visit in my poem.

    God bless.

    angel

  • angel May 15, 2010 at 8:40 am

    Myownverse- thank u for frankness with regards to ur opinion on the poem. Well, anybody can have their own interpretation on this poem if they want to and I will surely appreciate ur comments. To each his own opinion and I will respect ur ideas u shared in this page. Thank u for ur visit.

    God bless.

    angel

  • Lovely Bushra October 5, 2010 at 6:04 am

    i love the poem….!!!
    its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
    gr8 wrk !!!!

  • elyssa October 7, 2010 at 5:41 am

    but when love is at the ground you say yes but when its up on the sky you say no!!! That is hurting when someone does that to you

  • angel_babe55 October 11, 2010 at 3:37 am

    Lovely Bushra-That’s what love does in you heart and thoughts. You’re just mesmerized to think of how love grows even without seeing ur knight always. You’re willing to wait if love means waiting even in the deathbed.

    Thanx for the time of visiting my post and for ur lovely comments. I cant ask for more.You made my day!

    God bless.

    angel

  • angel_babe55 October 11, 2010 at 3:50 am

    Elyssa- Honestly,I dont exactly know what you mean by ur lines. It sounds so simple but I dont know if I have the same understanding as urs. But anyway, for me love is sometimes has its own risk. Not all the time love is always bed of roses. If u find a man or woman who truly loves u despite the distance, then ur lucky. Because love also means sacrifice, devotion, honesty to the one you love, loving u for whoever u are, if not-then, its not true that there’s true love.

    Thanx for the visit and for sharing ur thoughts.

    God bless.

    angel

  • chiesam November 25, 2010 at 3:33 am

    i love this poem coz its just like me…

  • maricella April 4, 2011 at 12:55 pm

    this is what am goin through:) <3

  • elyssa April 8, 2011 at 11:41 pm

    angel- thanks for ur advice but i don’t think i want to have a true love