August 9, 2011

as the sun rises,
like a zombie,Numbness
trapped in this dream
i watch life pass by;

i wandered alone,
fighting all that came in my way,
struggling to make sense of this
war, that does not seem to stop;

a shell of what i used to be,
i wear a mask to hide me from
the vultures that prowl all around,
wanting something to chew on;

no emotion,
no pain and,
no happiness,
just a haunted emptiness;

yelling and screaming,
hiding behind closed doors,
watching life pass by
with my empty eyes;

alone i sit,
in the grip of darkness,
as the arms of silence slowly engulf me,
a strange numbess takes over me;

  • swati August 13, 2011 at 7:59 pm

    too good……..

  • hillary August 14, 2011 at 11:54 pm

    I always followed praveen’s poem and I can emphatize with his sadness. AM just hoping that he can also see the other side of life. The hope and the joy.

  • queenie August 21, 2011 at 9:15 am

    this is how i can also describe life!!!!!

  • Ama August 24, 2011 at 7:03 pm

    i love the peom,and i can relate to it

  • Anika August 25, 2011 at 3:52 pm

    This poem was really good one of the best. I could feel his pain and can also relate to myself. Thank you for sharing and hope you find hapiness in life.

  • Glen September 10, 2011 at 9:30 am

    Very, very powerful – well written.

    You can tell its straight from the heart and mind

    Very well done

  • Rupesh March 2, 2012 at 9:39 pm

    A gud dark poem…

  • Alyssa March 20, 2012 at 6:47 pm

    Sometimes this is how i feel,And this is true <3

    • Praveen March 26, 2012 at 11:06 pm

      Thank you.

  • Tina March 20, 2012 at 6:49 pm

    This poem is completly true i sit at the back of the classroom crying from getting blamed and no one cares a feel empty and lonely and i bet soon my eyes will be gone from my tears X_x

  • Tyler April 20, 2012 at 5:35 pm

    exaclty how i feel too, excellent