Make my wish come true

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life  |  (43) Comments  |  

Make my wish come true

searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;

it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;

drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;

in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;

so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;

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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle

To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.  – Anatole France

We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown

Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil

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  • rajee krishnan said: (Tuesday January 20th, 2009)

    searching for answers
    that evaded me for so long,
    i got lost in a maze of treachery
    hidden under a mask of innocence

    wat’s that?? clarify… :)

    nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning

  • naima said: (Monday February 9th, 2009)

    man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz

  • hamdi said: (Thursday February 19th, 2009)

    man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….

  • aleah said: (Tuesday March 17th, 2009)

    wow what an amazing poem this is!!
    Its very well writin indeed

  • katie said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!! :)

  • katie said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*

    lol again u rock!!

  • Lidia said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

    ur awesomely awesome

  • Radhika said: (Friday May 1st, 2009)

    The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!

  • Shy said: (Friday May 1st, 2009)

    That was Great poem.

  • Pushpendra Pandey said: (Wednesday September 2nd, 2009)

    nice thoughts…….

  • laxmi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    you are speaking just what i feel right now.
    really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
    i am also interested in writing poems
    can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
    great words….

  • surbhi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    truly admirable simplicity and depth……
    thats what i liked most about your words..

  • laxmi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    greatt work….loved it
    can i also drop in some poems of my own??

  • Praveen said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    Hi,

    Please send them via email.

  • bunny said: (Wednesday January 6th, 2010)

    hey u hav written vry nice poems

  • Brooke said: (Sunday January 10th, 2010)

    Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well

  • febi said: (Tuesday March 23rd, 2010)

    like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
    thank you.

  • TAMIESHA KELLY said: (Friday June 4th, 2010)

    I ENJOYED YOUR POEM..I KNOW FROM FRIST HAND ASKING FOR A WISH ALSO KNOWN AS A BLESSING….I FEEL U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART….KEEPING THE FAITH…WE HAVE TO..

  • kelsie said: (Monday June 21st, 2010)

    cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen

  • kelsie said: (Monday June 21st, 2010)

    cool:D

  • beckiii said: (Thursday July 22nd, 2010)

    i luv da poem tha much man i wont stop reading it lmaoo :)

  • Bridgeeet said: (Tuesday August 17th, 2010)

    I know the excact same thing you were going through when u wrote that cuz i am going through it right now :(

  • sphoza said: (Thursday October 7th, 2010)

    what an amazing poem i have eva heard keep your good work!!

  • Kate Loverude said: (Wednesday January 5th, 2011)

    Dear God, you are real! I want you to make real wishes real wishing lobster wishker real wishing starlight starbright real wishing star fairy all come to life as long! I wish Jeff Becky Kelsey Loverude police security whole people from Massachusetts nipmuc school students teachers star program seniors Danielle work study Grandma Jan Erikson and her friends Aunt Julie Olsen and her family Uncle Ted Aunt Rhonda Bakken family Ms. Curran Brittany Bakken and her husband Luke Ashely Uncle Dave and their family Uncle Mike Cal and their family will all be Gone forever til seven days! No turning back! Amen

    Dear God, we are going to keep real wishes safe for tomorrow! I believe in you and real wishes as long! I wish will you change me into a thirteen-year-old younger kid and make me live inside a Disney Princess Dream House next to hotel in South Carolina with my two new good warm good kind hearted sisters Anya age thirteen and Sara age nine mermaids food drinks money movie tickets my cats Andre Winsalow all the time til seven days! No turning back! Amen

  • christopher blessing said: (Sunday February 6th, 2011)

    this poem reminds me of my poems and am very thankful to jesus that we still have more poet like you around………..its lovely

  • aishwarya said: (Wednesday February 16th, 2011)

    vao

  • megha said: (Monday February 28th, 2011)

    awesome poem….

  • lilly said: (Thursday April 14th, 2011)

    ooo wao this is an awesome poem touches my heart deep inside really love this poem……….lovely

  • Callie said: (Friday May 6th, 2011)

    I have to say I have read several of your poems tonight, and they are truly fantastic. They make me enjoy the fact that I love reading poetry and writing it. All I can say is “Thank you”!!

  • Logan said: (Monday May 23rd, 2011)

    I’m so glad you guys like my poem! I wrote it about myself.

  • short poems said: (Sunday July 17th, 2011)

    Lovely poem!

  • beauty said: (Tuesday July 19th, 2011)

    awsme poem, so true so well written

  • neeru said: (Wednesday August 3rd, 2011)

    really snobbish poem.. gr8 lines n awesome words.. :-)

  • gaurav khurana said: (Thursday August 4th, 2011)

    wats d deeper meaning of first para……if u plz cud tell????

  • khatoon said: (Wednesday August 10th, 2011)

    nice poem

  • Pinky said: (Sunday August 28th, 2011)

    Simple and profound!!

  • Afmina said: (Friday September 2nd, 2011)

    YOU R TOOOOOO……GUD….

    I LOVE DIZ POEM…

  • smita said: (Tuesday January 3rd, 2012)

    how could u man ! its really awesome. i wish i could talk 2 u ,i know u will better understand me than others.my soul speaks through ur poem.i just close my eyes after reading and it seems whatever is buried deep inside my heart is floating with ur words

  • vibha said: (Friday January 20th, 2012)

    Man u gave me the answers i was searching for last few days..thanks

  • praveen said: (Sunday February 26th, 2012)

    i want something new in life oterwise i lose me.

  • batul2000 said: (Friday March 9th, 2012)

    awsme poem really v.deep

  • santhosh said: (Monday June 18th, 2012)

    :-):-):-)fine beautiful:-):-):-)

  • Hiba said: (Sunday July 15th, 2012)

    Wow….The writer has very good thoughts….I love the poems of this writer…:)


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