Make my wish come true
searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;
it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;
drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;
in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;
so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;
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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle
To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe. – Anatole France
We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown
Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil
- Vintage Dreams
- Another Chance
- Life is Like A Butterfly
- Moments In Life
- Just One Life, Just One Chance
searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence
wat’s that?? clarify…
nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning
man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz
man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….
wow what an amazing poem this is!!
Its very well writin indeed
I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!!
srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*
lol again u rock!!
ur awesomely awesome
The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!
That was Great poem.
nice thoughts…….
you are speaking just what i feel right now.
really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
i am also interested in writing poems
can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
great words….
truly admirable simplicity and depth……
thats what i liked most about your words..
greatt work….loved it
can i also drop in some poems of my own??
Hi,
Please send them via email.
hey u hav written vry nice poems
Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well
like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
thank you.
I ENJOYED YOUR POEM..I KNOW FROM FRIST HAND ASKING FOR A WISH ALSO KNOWN AS A BLESSING….I FEEL U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART….KEEPING THE FAITH…WE HAVE TO..
cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen
cool:D