Make my wish come true

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life  |  Trackback  |  (20) Comments  |  38,665 views

Make my wish come true

searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;

it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;

drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;

in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;

so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;

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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle

To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.  – Anatole France

We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown

Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil

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  • rajee krishnan said: (Tuesday January 20th, 2009)

    searching for answers
    that evaded me for so long,
    i got lost in a maze of treachery
    hidden under a mask of innocence

    wat’s that?? clarify… :)

    nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning

  • naima said: (Monday February 9th, 2009)

    man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz

  • hamdi said: (Thursday February 19th, 2009)

    man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….

  • aleah said: (Tuesday March 17th, 2009)

    wow what an amazing poem this is!!
    Its very well writin indeed

  • katie said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!! :)

  • katie said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*

    lol again u rock!!

  • Lidia said: (Sunday April 19th, 2009)

    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

    ur awesomely awesome

  • Radhika said: (Friday May 1st, 2009)

    The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!

  • Shy said: (Friday May 1st, 2009)

    That was Great poem.

  • Pushpendra Pandey said: (Wednesday September 2nd, 2009)

    nice thoughts…….

  • laxmi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    you are speaking just what i feel right now.
    really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
    i am also interested in writing poems
    can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
    great words….

  • surbhi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    truly admirable simplicity and depth……
    thats what i liked most about your words..

  • laxmi said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    greatt work….loved it
    can i also drop in some poems of my own??

  • Praveen said: (Wednesday December 9th, 2009)

    Hi,

    Please send them via email.

  • bunny said: (Wednesday January 6th, 2010)

    hey u hav written vry nice poems

  • Brooke said: (Sunday January 10th, 2010)

    Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well

  • febi said: (Tuesday March 23rd, 2010)

    like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
    thank you.

  • TAMIESHA KELLY said: (Friday June 4th, 2010)

    I ENJOYED YOUR POEM..I KNOW FROM FRIST HAND ASKING FOR A WISH ALSO KNOWN AS A BLESSING….I FEEL U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART….KEEPING THE FAITH…WE HAVE TO..

  • kelsie said: (Monday June 21st, 2010)

    cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen

  • kelsie said: (Monday June 21st, 2010)

    cool:D

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