Make my wish come true

January 17, 2009

Make my wish come true

searching for answers
that evaded me for so long,
i got lost in a maze of treachery
hidden under a mask of innocence;

it’s been so long
words kept me awake
all night long, making
me restless and confused;

drowning in the wishes
of a long lost past,
i let my life down,
i let myself down;

in the midst of the night
under the velvet skies
i surrendered to life
i whisper for forgiveness;

so with a smile on my lips
and a wish on my heart
i give faith(hope) one more reason
i give life another chance
to make my wish come true;

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What a wonderful life I’ve had! I only wish I’d realized it sooner – Sidonie Gabrielle

To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.  – Anatole France

We are told never to cross a bridge until we come to it, but this world is owned by men who have ‘crossed bridges’ in their imagination far ahead of the crowd. – Unknown

Sometimes you just got to give yourself what you wish someone else would give you. – Dr Phil

  • rajee krishnan January 20, 2009 at 3:41 am

    searching for answers
    that evaded me for so long,
    i got lost in a maze of treachery
    hidden under a mask of innocence

    wat’s that?? clarify… πŸ™‚

    nicely expressed.. tho i didn’t quite understand the deeper meaning

  • naima February 9, 2009 at 3:34 pm

    man,i luvvv dis poems 4realz

  • hamdi February 19, 2009 at 9:20 pm

    man i wish if i could rite dis poem 4realz man dammm i cant even sleep 2rite 4realz it make me a many thing to remember dat i wished before so i wish it come true….

  • aleah March 17, 2009 at 6:55 pm

    wow what an amazing poem this is!!
    Its very well writin indeed

  • katie April 19, 2009 at 11:19 am

    I used this poem for my book club. I love the emotion in this poem and i got an A for it!!!! i could tell what you mean and are trying to say to wour readers. Keep on writing these awesome poems!!!!!! πŸ™‚

  • katie April 19, 2009 at 11:21 am

    srry *i can tell what you mean and are trying to say to your readers*

    lol again u rock!!

  • Lidia April 19, 2009 at 11:24 am

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    ur awesomely awesome

  • Radhika May 1, 2009 at 11:12 am

    The Poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!

  • Shy May 1, 2009 at 11:13 am

    That was Great poem.

  • Pushpendra Pandey September 2, 2009 at 9:39 pm

    nice thoughts…….

  • laxmi December 9, 2009 at 1:26 pm

    you are speaking just what i feel right now.
    really, i like good poems and few of your poems have made me your fan.
    i am also interested in writing poems
    can i sometimes drop in my poems here or wherever??
    great words….

  • surbhi December 9, 2009 at 1:29 pm

    truly admirable simplicity and depth……
    thats what i liked most about your words..

  • laxmi December 9, 2009 at 1:36 pm

    greatt work….loved it
    can i also drop in some poems of my own??

    • Praveen December 9, 2009 at 7:52 pm


      Please send them via email.

  • bunny January 6, 2010 at 3:15 am

    hey u hav written vry nice poems

  • Brooke January 10, 2010 at 7:07 pm

    Nice poem nicely written but some parts I cannot understand as well

  • febi March 23, 2010 at 6:11 pm

    like this poem. you showed what i feel now…
    thank you.

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  • kelsie June 21, 2010 at 11:11 am

    cool, i want my grandma to get me a dog i believe it will happen

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  • beckiii July 22, 2010 at 6:18 am

    i luv da poem tha much man i wont stop reading it lmaoo πŸ™‚

  • Bridgeeet August 17, 2010 at 3:14 am

    I know the excact same thing you were going through when u wrote that cuz i am going through it right now πŸ™

  • sphoza October 7, 2010 at 5:19 am

    what an amazing poem i have eva heard keep your good work!!

  • Kate Loverude January 5, 2011 at 4:06 pm

    Dear God, you are real! I want you to make real wishes real wishing lobster wishker real wishing starlight starbright real wishing star fairy all come to life as long! I wish Jeff Becky Kelsey Loverude police security whole people from Massachusetts nipmuc school students teachers star program seniors Danielle work study Grandma Jan Erikson and her friends Aunt Julie Olsen and her family Uncle Ted Aunt Rhonda Bakken family Ms. Curran Brittany Bakken and her husband Luke Ashely Uncle Dave and their family Uncle Mike Cal and their family will all be Gone forever til seven days! No turning back! Amen

    Dear God, we are going to keep real wishes safe for tomorrow! I believe in you and real wishes as long! I wish will you change me into a thirteen-year-old younger kid and make me live inside a Disney Princess Dream House next to hotel in South Carolina with my two new good warm good kind hearted sisters Anya age thirteen and Sara age nine mermaids food drinks money movie tickets my cats Andre Winsalow all the time til seven days! No turning back! Amen

  • christopher blessing February 6, 2011 at 4:39 am

    this poem reminds me of my poems and am very thankful to jesus that we still have more poet like you around………..its lovely

  • aishwarya February 16, 2011 at 4:58 am


  • megha February 28, 2011 at 5:15 am

    awesome poem….

  • lilly April 14, 2011 at 12:43 am

    ooo wao this is an awesome poem touches my heart deep inside really love this poem……….lovely

  • Callie May 6, 2011 at 11:01 pm

    I have to say I have read several of your poems tonight, and they are truly fantastic. They make me enjoy the fact that I love reading poetry and writing it. All I can say is “Thank you”!!

  • Logan May 23, 2011 at 3:48 pm

    I’m so glad you guys like my poem! I wrote it about myself.

  • short poems July 17, 2011 at 1:28 pm

    Lovely poem!

  • beauty July 19, 2011 at 6:03 am

    awsme poem, so true so well written

  • neeru August 3, 2011 at 8:54 am

    really snobbish poem.. gr8 lines n awesome words.. πŸ™‚

  • gaurav khurana August 4, 2011 at 12:05 am

    wats d deeper meaning of first para……if u plz cud tell????

  • khatoon August 10, 2011 at 11:04 am

    nice poem

  • Pinky August 28, 2011 at 12:54 am

    Simple and profound!!

  • Afmina September 2, 2011 at 10:12 am



  • smita January 3, 2012 at 10:02 am

    how could u man ! its really awesome. i wish i could talk 2 u ,i know u will better understand me than soul speaks through ur poem.i just close my eyes after reading and it seems whatever is buried deep inside my heart is floating with ur words

  • vibha January 20, 2012 at 11:31 am

    Man u gave me the answers i was searching for last few days..thanks

  • praveen February 26, 2012 at 12:19 am

    i want something new in life oterwise i lose me.

  • batul2000 March 9, 2012 at 10:32 pm

    awsme poem really v.deep

  • santhosh June 18, 2012 at 5:23 am

    :-):-):-)fine beautiful:-):-):-)

  • Hiba July 15, 2012 at 3:22 pm

    Wow….The writer has very good thoughts….I love the poems of this writer…:)