Incomplete

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Friendship  |  (28) Comments  |  

pals

the grey sky looming above,
rain drops still dripping down
from the pregnant clouds above,
we set out on our journey once again;

around and around we go
in slow circles, moving
to the beat of the thunder
and rain that surrounds us;

as the droplets hit the ground,
shattered realizations lay scattered
reminding me nothing is same
as it seems to be;

as another memory turns to dust
i cut the lifeline that attaches me to the past
and i shove it back into the depths
where nothing will ever bring it back alive;

the rain does nothing to stop our journey,
never forgetting, who we are
we walk these streets of madness,
knowing that,without each-other…..
we are simply incomplete.

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this has multiple meanings, but one central theme.
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Each friend represents a world in us, a world possibly not born until they arrive, and it is only by this meeting that a new world is born. – Ana├»s Nin

It is one of the severest tests of friendship to tell your friend his faults. So to love a man that you cannot bear to see a stain upon him, and to speak painful truth through loving words, that is friendship. – Henry Ward Beecher

In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends – Martin Luther King, jr.

In everyone’s life, at some time, our inner fire goes out.  It is then burst into flame by an encounter with another human being.  We should all be thankful for those people who rekindle the inner spirit.  ~Albert Schweitzer

The most I can do for my friend is simply be his friend.  ~Henry David Thoreau

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  • gurcharan said: (Tuesday December 23rd, 2008)

    your peoms are well writin to be read thank you for a lovely poem to read knowing that are loved ones are still to be……

  • me said: (Wednesday February 18th, 2009)

    Who wrote this poem?? Someone please tell me. :)

  • rakesh said: (Thursday April 2nd, 2009)

    Relay touching to The heart, Very nice

  • lizzy said: (Tuesday May 5th, 2009)

    i love that poem

  • mahdy said: (Wednesday May 6th, 2009)

    it is really great

  • matthew said: (Monday May 18th, 2009)

    wow taht was really nice

  • Jordan said: (Wednesday July 1st, 2009)

    Enjoyed it. Nice one

  • samantha said: (Tuesday September 15th, 2009)

    LOVE THIS POEM ALOT

  • Dick Feightner said: (Wednesday February 3rd, 2010)

    Can you tell me the name of the poem or show me the complete poem in which these lines are contained; “the moving finger having writ, moves on and not a word or wit can change a line of it”

  • N C Siddharth said: (Sunday May 30th, 2010)

    Hi Praveen,

    Nice one on Friendship da…

  • Mason Parker said: (Thursday June 10th, 2010)

    I also like to make poems and read lots of books that is related to Poetry.~:-

  • muna said: (Saturday July 10th, 2010)

    very nice…. poem

  • muna said: (Saturday July 10th, 2010)

    very nice…. i appreciate ur cretivity..who is d poet

  • Praveen said: (Monday July 12th, 2010)

    Thanks Muna.
    Incomplete is written by me – Praveen

  • Alyssa said: (Tuesday July 27th, 2010)

    That was absolutley amazing. I find that some of your poems seem to be centered on lessons that we learn along the pathway of our lives. Quite amazing poem!

  • prashansa said: (Wednesday July 28th, 2010)

    awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • cicillia novita said: (Saturday October 2nd, 2010)

    makes me smile ^^
    love it =)

  • Pippa said: (Thursday December 16th, 2010)

    Hi I was wandering, would it be okay if I used your poem as lyrics to a song? It’s a lovely poem, but I thought I better check first (:

  • Praveen said: (Wednesday December 22nd, 2010)

    Please go ahead, but kindly credit the source including the website url.

  • lilly18 said: (Saturday January 1st, 2011)

    your peoms are well writin to be read thank you for a lovely poem to read knowing that are loved ones are still to be

  • jennifer1 said: (Saturday January 1st, 2011)

    your peoms are well writin to be read thank you for a lovely poem to read knowing that are loved ones are still to be

  • David10 said: (Sunday January 2nd, 2011)

    your peoms are well writin to be read thank you for a lovely poem to read knowing that are loved ones are still to be

  • prenomprenom said: (Friday January 28th, 2011)

    who ever we are there’s this missing piece that we’re always waiting for to be completed and to feel safe cus you’re not by yourself anymore; someone to rely on and to believe in without thinking at all

  • swati said: (Wednesday June 15th, 2011)

    u write really well

  • khatoon said: (Friday August 12th, 2011)

    hello praveen what made you write this wondeful poem i just love this

  • cowboy69 said: (Monday January 30th, 2012)

    Thats funny that you would say that praveen cause i hear that this poem is about to be put in the a book by congress and it was my girlfriend that wrote it

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday January 31st, 2012)

    I am afraid i am the original author of this poem and not your girlfriend.

  • Jessy said: (Sunday November 4th, 2012)

    I love this poem it shows a true definition of friendship. . .


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