Come Closer

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (16) Comments  |  1,454 views
Couple Dancing
pushing my way past the hordes
i walk inside the restaurant
under a hazy spell
of shock and awe
 
less than 24 hours ago
we were strangers
walking the path
we created for ourselves
 
one brief look
one little smile
my world was turned upside down
in one single moment
 
love at first sight
i never believed
until the moment
i saw you watching me!
 
as i stood there
in the dim light of the restaurant
bathed in her radiance
she shines like a star
 
under her spell
unable to pull myself away
turning up the music
and switching off the lights
i whisper “come closer”
 
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  • blindwreck said: (Monday July 28th, 2008)

    Again??? :O

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  • Praveen said: (Monday July 28th, 2008)

    again?

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  • blindwreck said: (Monday July 28th, 2008)

    you want her so close?? again?? :P

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  • Praveen said: (Monday July 28th, 2008)

    want her close.. yeah.

    again??? i have not said close before ;)

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  • blindwreck said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    “pull your close and hold you near!” from your previous poem!!!!!! ;)

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    hehehehe…
    different meaning, diff context ;)

    there, i want to.

    now come close ;)

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  • Raji Krishnan said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    hmmm… so some girl at a restaurant.. love at first sight!!

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  • Raji Krishnan said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    i understand now.. it must be sophizz you met at marina inn… got you!! :D

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  • blindwreck said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    :O so then two girls??? diff context diff meaning… kya ho raha hai, haan??? :P ;)

    so what’s next??? :P :D
    first you wanted to.. now close… next??? for some dumb reason i’m reminded of poetbittersweet’s latest poem!! :D ;)

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    adipavi’s

    it is def not sophizz. thank you very much :)

    and it is def not two girls.

    diff context meaning, first poem was written with a diff scenario. this one diff scenario.

    same girl, but diff scenarios. diff emotions.. thats all.

    oh… poetbittersweet’s latest poem??? thats bad.. i havent read his latest poem. so i cant do anything..
    this is not related to it anways; )

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  • Raji Krishnan said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    ha ha.. :) dont get pissed off.. was just kidding.. only to get the truth out of you!! knew its the same girl in two different scenarios in the first read..

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    lol..dont worry.. get the truth out!!

    hahahaha…..

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  • blindwreck said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    phew! so much of emotional burst already?? my my… :P

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    yeah, i know..

    too much la?

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  • blindwreck said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    bask on… bask on my friend!
    the day is yours! ;)

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    hahahaha…

    thank you ;)

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