Breath of fresh air!

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (4) Comments  |  

i went to bed
trying to remain awake
for fear of breaking this
lovely dream of you and me!

wondering if i sleep,
these dreams would drift away into darkness
never to return again,
i kept my eyes open!

a beautiful smile
that’s hard to forget
you entered my soul
like a breath of fresh air!

swimming deep in darkness
i came to the surface for air,
and i have not gone back
ever since that day!

ever since you sneaked into my soul,
life has changed completely
struggling to push darkness away
i was toying with life!

i don’t understand how it happened,
i was on the road to nowhere
you came in and took hold of my soul
putting me back on to the path of happiness!

i thought i knew what love was,
i thought i knew everything,
now sitting here writing this,
i feel i am so lost without you!

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I am like a falling star who has finally found her place next to another in a lovely constellation, where we will sparkle in the heavens forever. – Amy Tan
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Comments

  • Raji Krishnan said: (Tuesday August 26th, 2008)

    so touching.. the 2nd and 3rd para :)

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday August 26th, 2008)

    Thank you Raji :)
    Yeah, thats a fact :D

  • Rupesh Popli said: (Tuesday April 26th, 2011)

    Yeah…that fact.. :D

  • sumant sharma said: (Monday September 5th, 2011)

    [...] since you sneaked into my soul, life has changed completely struggling to push darkness away i was toying with [...]


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