Without You, I’m Nothing

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (21) Comments  |  

woke up every morning,
my lips on your cheek,
a sleepy smile and the
chase began;

Without you I'm nothing. With you, I'm something. Together, we're everything

as i ran towards the invisible goal,
it seemed so far away,
yet i ran for years and years,
expecting it to be near, but getting fooled again and again;

i should have stopped,
maybe i should have listened to you,
as i kept running towards it,
i slowly faded away from your memories,
every minute and every second;

now as i stand in the middle,
exhausted, tired and clueless,
i turn around to see how far i have come,
and all i see is emptiness;

lonely, scared and plagued by indecision,
I stand here in the middle of nowhere,
not sure of which way to go?

should i leave it all and go forward?
or should i stay here, hoping you would catchup with me?
or should i take the long walk back home to be with you?

far away from what i know,
running towards what i do not know,
wondering if i will ever see you again,
Without You, I’m Nothing.
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Without you I’m nothing. With you, I’m something. Together, we’re everything

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Comments

  • Ranu said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    Hi, U have written once again a beeeeautiful poem. Excellent thoughts and i love your poems. :)

  • Heather said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    This is also another good poem Praveen, keep up the good work.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    Thanks Heather.

  • Praveen said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    Thanks Ranu.

  • Gabriela said: (Thursday February 9th, 2012)

    I love you work! Absolutely amazing.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday February 9th, 2012)

    Thank you.

  • Kavita said: (Saturday February 11th, 2012)

    from Heart..

  • Praveen said: (Saturday February 11th, 2012)

    Thank you Kavita.

  • Jen said: (Friday February 17th, 2012)

    Lovely poem! Loved the last words!! :)

  • Alexis Smith said: (Monday February 27th, 2012)

    Great!

  • Praveen said: (Thursday March 1st, 2012)

    Thank you Alexis

  • Akramkhan said: (Monday March 12th, 2012)

    amazing bro,u rocks

  • erie morgan said: (Monday March 12th, 2012)

    i love this one i’m going to send it to my friend who loves to read peotry.

  • Aya said: (Wednesday March 14th, 2012)

    Good poem

  • khyati said: (Saturday March 24th, 2012)

    nce poem…….

  • jojo said: (Friday March 30th, 2012)

    hi,,i thnk this is a realyy good poem duckey :0

  • Alexis said: (Thursday April 5th, 2012)

    This is a very good poem and I but this a relationship poem that I have every read for right now

  • vicky said: (Sunday April 29th, 2012)

    I’m crying for ur love, now lonely is hard to survive in this painful life…
    Love u Neha, ur my soul, my everything but still we are not together…

  • Bobbi Purvis said: (Tuesday May 1st, 2012)

    Hi,

    Such a beautiful emotional poem from the heart, and I am sure so many of us feel that way at some point in our lives.

    Thank you for sharing,

  • subhasish kumar said: (Saturday May 5th, 2012)

    Very nice…

  • gege said: (Wednesday June 13th, 2012)

    exactly how i feel!


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