Love

Prisoner of Love

March 28, 2011

just another random thought,prisoner of love
sitting in the silence
of my disturbed thoughts,
i refused to think about it;

i closed my eyes,
tried to shut it tight,
carried everywhere by the wind,
it seemed so real and so true;

gazing deeply into the pool of water,
i see my face staring back in
amazement and in wonder
at the emotions that i am overcome with;

drawing me closer and closer,
stirred by the depth of passion,
torn between the life that is
and the life that will be, i struggle;

trying to find a solution,
i try to claw my way out,
i try to fight the feelings
and all the emotions i have been overcome with;

sitting in the dark,
thinking of you,
wishing you were here,
realizing i am a prisoner of love,
a prisoner of your love;

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for a special someone

 

  • Richa March 29, 2011 at 9:35 am

    Felt each word as I read, beautifully crafted! God Bless!

  • MARICELLA April 1, 2011 at 1:13 pm

    this is such a good poem i used for my english class and this is how i feel rite now:)

  • kavita April 3, 2011 at 2:00 am

    Nice one

  • Rupesh Popli April 26, 2011 at 9:34 pm

    its was beautifully expressed…

  • Praveen kumar July 16, 2011 at 12:51 am

    …such a beautiful lines..pure & great 🙂

  • seph July 20, 2011 at 8:10 pm

    it’s nice ,, just reflecting your self…
    now, i feel good.

  • ambily July 26, 2011 at 2:47 am

    gud

  • Praveen Sheokand September 24, 2011 at 1:02 am

    such as a most beautiful lines

  • mulalo November 24, 2011 at 3:40 am

    wow, you’ve expressed how i am feeling rite now,

  • jhoanne December 6, 2011 at 5:38 am

    inspiring

  • Inaboya frank February 14, 2012 at 7:33 am

    I love this! It describes how i feel

  • meera March 18, 2012 at 11:42 pm

    superb !

  • eriemorganmaples August 2, 2012 at 11:00 am

    i agree with inaboya and meera on what they said about the poem it’s really good i had a great time reading it keep up the good work okay