Just wanna be with you

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (41) Comments  |  

valentine-heart

as the rains continue to batter,
standing on the balcony
i watch the rain drops
converge into one pool of water;

i wish you were here
standing next to me
in this rain soaked night,
holding hands, scheming of things pretty;

Wondering to myself, so late at night,
what is it that attracts me to you?
Thinking to myself, why are you always on my mind?
What power do you have in what you do?

thinking about where i stood,
i try to push you out of my mind,
but every time i push you out of my thoughts,
you crawl back into my world and fill my senses;

it’s so hard to keep smiling
and continue denying what i feel
i don’t know why,
a thousand reasons i have none;

i can’t go on like this,
i can’t pretend everything is fine,
when i just wanna be with you 
hold you tight tonight and every night;

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The simple lack of her is more to me than others’ presence.  ~Edward Thomas

[W]hen you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible.  ~Nora Ephron, When Harry Met Sally

If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden.  ~Claudia Ghandi

If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I.  ~Michel de Montaigne

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  • raji krishnan said: (Sunday November 23rd, 2008)

    oh i see the poet is back to form :).. super good…
    cheers

  • Praveen said: (Sunday November 23rd, 2008)

    Thank you :)

    Kinda inspired by ur recent poem ;)

  • precious taylor said: (Sunday January 25th, 2009)

    I am 14 years old i been working on for almsy for 15 years. thanks you from precious

  • esly96 said: (Tuesday February 17th, 2009)

    i am a 12 year boy that fell in love wit poems plz make more like this

  • Adriana said: (Wednesday April 22nd, 2009)

    this poem is beutiful and very touching for me. i sourd of went thru the same thing. this poem really saw how i felt. i love it that the fact that when you write this, you not only write it with expression but with lots of emotion. and to me its lke you let it all out and said everything you felt. right when i read this, i could picture it al in my head, it’s like a story to me. a beautiful one.

  • sindhu said: (Wednesday May 20th, 2009)

    the poem is so touchable and heartfelt…..a beautiful one which will remain forever

  • isidore manuel said: (Thursday May 21st, 2009)

    omg

  • isidore said: (Tuesday May 26th, 2009)

    OMGsh

  • isidore said: (Tuesday May 26th, 2009)

    OMGsh. wow

  • alexus said: (Monday June 15th, 2009)

    i am in love with dis poem

  • a b said: (Friday October 2nd, 2009)

    The simple lack of him is more to me than others’ presence.

  • kathy said: (Tuesday October 6th, 2009)

    Really like this one.. it is like you know exactly what I am going thru right now.. makes me truely believe there is a light at the end of this tunnel I feel I am in at the moment

  • iza(: said: (Thursday October 8th, 2009)

    ooooooooown *-* hey, i’m from brazil , and I reaaaaaaly love this poem . THAAAAANKS ,

  • Mayne said: (Friday October 23rd, 2009)

    Beautiful words wonderful story

  • Rohini said: (Saturday October 31st, 2009)

    i dont have words..

  • David Bohmiller said: (Thursday November 5th, 2009)

    Your words bring powerful emotion to your story. Excellent work.

    David Bohmiller

  • Denise Long said: (Friday November 13th, 2009)

    very powerful poem its heartfelt it is how i feel about a past lover from so long ago .

  • babygurl said: (Friday May 28th, 2010)

    wow this is a great poem!!!! i love it :)

  • Kapil_Pardeshi said: (Wednesday June 2nd, 2010)

    Very nice ……..
    touches to the memories….

  • King of None said: (Monday November 8th, 2010)

    Very touching. I know what that feels like. Makes me remember the good times with my ex

  • thiani said: (Tuesday December 14th, 2010)

    wow I’m a 14 year old girl that fell in love with your work!!!! congrats!

  • dayana said: (Wednesday December 15th, 2010)

    omg its supper i am huge fan of urs…..:-)

  • Hallie said: (Thursday December 16th, 2010)

    i love poems. they inspire me. they make me think of life and love each day. adn make me realize that its just enough to make it through. i thank all poets for looking in your heart and writing it down on paper and inspring those who look for hope.

  • puru said: (Wednesday February 2nd, 2011)

    wat a poem!!!!!!! m speechlesssssss!!! O.O

  • Callie said: (Friday May 6th, 2011)

    This is an awesome poem for all those in love!

  • Melissa Gibb jensen said: (Thursday June 2nd, 2011)

    The poem is good I really like it alot I write poetry too and it inspires me more to and I love reading poetry to get the aspects and influences everyone else has to write about life love and dreams.

  • geetha said: (Wednesday August 24th, 2011)

    i felt this is me in the poem because i love my husband so much ill always like to be with him

  • Indran said: (Friday September 23rd, 2011)

    The true feel of a lover transformed to words. The thoughts guides u so well ! Amazing , speechless … This is how I feel right now to my lov of life . Thanks.

  • mohsen kiani said: (Tuesday October 4th, 2011)

    realy nice.tanks

  • Ravi Ranjan said: (Tuesday November 1st, 2011)

    heart touching sir….

  • Megan said: (Monday November 7th, 2011)

    Beautiful!!! I loved it, so inspiring. Would you mind if I used parts of it in a song?? I will make sure to give you credit for writing such a wonderful poem!! :D

  • Brittany Brewer said: (Monday December 5th, 2011)

    i love this poem i hope my chrush does to :)
    this poem is so wonderful and sweet

  • Sandile said: (Tuesday December 27th, 2011)

    love it…at last i found home

  • meera said: (Wednesday January 4th, 2012)

    No words………just wanna say all the best!

  • kazi laizo said: (Sunday January 15th, 2012)

    i like it verry much

  • Praveen said: (Monday January 16th, 2012)

    Thank you. Glad you liked it.

  • jill said: (Monday January 23rd, 2012)

    i love this poem i can actually relate to this

  • V said: (Tuesday February 7th, 2012)

    Reading this made my night.

  • yegane said: (Friday February 10th, 2012)

    actually it is perfect,I enjoy it

  • ♥ Rukhsar ♥ said: (Monday February 13th, 2012)

    I think the same its perfect Rukhy xxxx

  • eriemorganmaples said: (Tuesday August 7th, 2012)

    i love this one really i do


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