Can you feel it?

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Love  |  (5) Comments  |  2,997 views

Can you feel it?

i have been wondering
how in one single day
i started thinking
only about you

how do you describe a feeling?
words run away from me
things that i only dreamt of
only witnessed in movies

things when others used to say
i scoffed at them for being fools
but just like a hurricane
you came and swept me off my feet

it’s been a while
emotions long put away
in vaults of steel
now slowly forcing its way out

you got me hypnotised
you got my heart beating like a comet
faster and faster with each moment
i never felt this way

let me break the ice
allow me to hold you in my arms
walking the offbeat path
let us bask in love
and live life together

no more wondering why
no more living life in dreams
let me hold you close
girl, can you feel it?

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  • blindwreck said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    Mammamia!!! This one’s awesommee. Methinks its best to leave you in solitude to enjoy your moments! Happy for you man! :)

    “no more wondering why
    no more living life in dreams
    let me hold you close
    girl, can you feel it?”

    These lines are killer!!

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    Thank you :)

    Glad you liked this :)

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  • Raji Krishnan said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    you have taken a completely different style of writing.. wonder what inspired you!! that’s a goody goody one!! i can’t choose the best lines.. loved the poem on the whole..kudos!

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  • Praveen said: (Tuesday July 29th, 2008)

    Thank you :)

    Glad you liked it ;)

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  • Farheen said: (Tuesday October 20th, 2009)

    woow its beautiful…..

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