Can you feel it?
i have been wondering
how in one single day
i started thinking
only about you
how do you describe a feeling?
words run away from me
things that i only dreamt of
only witnessed in movies
things when others used to say
i scoffed at them for being fools
but just like a hurricane
you came and swept me off my feet
it’s been a while
emotions long put away
in vaults of steel
now slowly forcing its way out
you got me hypnotised
you got my heart beating like a comet
faster and faster with each moment
i never felt this way
let me break the ice
allow me to hold you in my arms
walking the offbeat path
let us bask in love
and live life together
no more wondering why
no more living life in dreams
let me hold you close
girl, can you feel it?
Mammamia!!! This one’s awesommee. Methinks its best to leave you in solitude to enjoy your moments! Happy for you man!
“no more wondering why
no more living life in dreams
let me hold you close
girl, can you feel it?”
These lines are killer!!
Comment on July 29, 2008 @ 3:15 am
Thank you
Glad you liked this
Comment on July 29, 2008 @ 4:07 am
you have taken a completely different style of writing.. wonder what inspired you!! that’s a goody goody one!! i can’t choose the best lines.. loved the poem on the whole..kudos!
Comment on July 29, 2008 @ 4:30 am
Thank you
Glad you liked it
Comment on July 29, 2008 @ 6:48 pm