Love

Can you feel it?

July 29, 2008

Can you feel it?

i have been wondering
how in one single day
i started thinking
only about you

how do you describe a feeling?
words run away from me
things that i only dreamt of
only witnessed in movies

things when others used to say
i scoffed at them for being fools
but just like a hurricane
you came and swept me off my feet

it’s been a while
emotions long put away
in vaults of steel
now slowly forcing its way out

you got me hypnotised
you got my heart beating like a comet
faster and faster with each moment
i never felt this way

let me break the ice
allow me to hold you in my arms
walking the offbeat path
let us bask in love
and live life together

no more wondering why
no more living life in dreams
let me hold you close
girl, can you feel it?

  • blindwreck July 29, 2008 at 3:15 am

    Mammamia!!! This one’s awesommee. Methinks its best to leave you in solitude to enjoy your moments! Happy for you man! 🙂

    “no more wondering why
    no more living life in dreams
    let me hold you close
    girl, can you feel it?”

    These lines are killer!!

  • Praveen July 29, 2008 at 4:07 am

    Thank you 🙂

    Glad you liked this 🙂

  • Raji Krishnan July 29, 2008 at 4:30 am

    you have taken a completely different style of writing.. wonder what inspired you!! that’s a goody goody one!! i can’t choose the best lines.. loved the poem on the whole..kudos!

  • Praveen July 29, 2008 at 6:48 pm

    Thank you 🙂

    Glad you liked it 😉

  • Farheen October 20, 2009 at 5:21 am

    woow its beautiful…..