Home Life Confused



sitting in the room,
thinking about everything so far,
i am beginning to wonder
if life is supposed to be like this;

high on a pedestal one day, Lonely Man Sitting
kissing the dirt the next,
the balance keeps tilting
from the good to the bad;

nobody said life would be easy and simple,
but nobody said life can be so hard,
struggling through a hazy cloud of confusion,
life seems a bitch;

one hand giving things not asked,
while the other not giving things asked,
it’s like taking one step forward,
and two steps backward;

disheartened and feeling the blues,
the road to happiness seems to be enigmatic,
in this crystal maze of life
the game goes on until the end;

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Ranu March 28, 2012 - 12:06 am

Beautiful… 🙂

Praveen March 28, 2012 - 5:29 am

Thank you.

Ranu April 12, 2012 - 12:38 am

Looking forward to your next poem.

Kate April 12, 2012 - 7:22 am

I really liked this poem and i hope you keep writing.

Asmaâ April 27, 2012 - 6:11 pm

I dont usually leave comments for something I read, but after reading what you’ve created, I felt the need of thanking you.
Im and 18year old student, and right now, I am going through a phase of my life : cloudy, blurry, and a tournado of question marks and confusions happening that give me the feeling that happinness is a thousand miles away.. sadly, we live in a world where good people have to fight, and the bad ones can have it easy..
but we have to keep believing in a better tomorrow, and climb up on top of the pedestal all over again.. after all, if life wasnt such a bumpy ride and a challenge, it wouldnt be as much interesting..

fighting for a better tomorrow.. And wishing you all the best!
Sending love all the way from Morocco.

Asmaâ. 🙂

julia April 29, 2012 - 7:33 pm

yah cute!!!very creative..I like it.

ashler June 1, 2012 - 6:23 am

keep on doing this great

cristina June 20, 2012 - 7:41 am

its just soooo inspireing and creative really just fasinating 🙂

Luz June 27, 2012 - 2:53 am


Rodzae July 2, 2012 - 2:41 pm

I love dis poem soo much it’s beautiful Praveen u are telling a story and people dat go through struggles are the ones with heart. So keep yo head up praveen don’t let nothing keep u down.

Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren July 28, 2012 - 2:05 am

Keep up the good job! This is very nice. 🙂

eriemorganmaples August 3, 2012 - 2:17 pm

i loved it but i didn’t like the word that you put in when it said this: ‘Life seems like a bitch’you could’ve left that word out and put some-thing else in there to make that sound better, but other than that it was a good poem i loved it, but that one word that you should’ve left out

gege ramon September 9, 2012 - 3:59 pm

very nice! great lines! 🙂

eriemorganmaples October 14, 2012 - 12:16 pm

i wouldn’t agree with you on that gege ramon


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