Life, Love

Some Days

November 9, 2008

Sunrise Hope

some days i want to live
some days i wish it’s over
some days i long to see
some days i wait to die;

some days i think i am fine
some days i believe i have a problem
some days i am strong
some days i am weak;

some days i am closer to truth
some days it seems far far away
some days i think i understand
some days i am just lost;

some days i just wish
everything would disappear
some days i just hope
you could be near;

some days i have a feeling
one day everything
will be alright
and that day is closer
than ever;

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“Many of the great achievements of the world were accomplished by tired and discouraged men who kept on working.”  ~Author Unknown

“What seems to us as bitter trials are often blessings in disguise”  ~Author Unknown

Hope begins in the dark, the stubborn hope that if you just show up and try to do the right thing, the dawn will come.  ~Anne Lamott

Hope is putting faith to work when doubting would be easier.  ~Author Unknown

  • dipti December 30, 2008 at 8:19 am

    hey….nice poem……..sometimes even i feel the same!!!!!!!

  • tana May 17, 2009 at 7:02 pm

    nicely put

  • V... July 2, 2009 at 10:36 pm

    its a lovely poem..

  • v... July 10, 2009 at 3:02 am

    re-read it…yes, it is! 🙂

  • miki October 4, 2009 at 4:53 am

    wow….i liked it…as all these different kinda feelings..often come 2 my mind the same way,u described….keep it up.

  • kathy October 6, 2009 at 8:02 pm

    Kind of reminds me of the one I wrote called ‘I have many faces’

  • Anorvan December 2, 2009 at 3:03 am

    Dis Poem Reflects my life…!!! 😉

  • LYN December 6, 2009 at 1:41 am

    HEY! Praveen u can do better than that! I think u were pretty depresed at the time u wrote this poem . I do the same! SO hope to see some livelier poems from u .

  • Shweta January 28, 2010 at 3:52 am

    superb yaar…..
    wat an imagination…….

  • dee March 9, 2010 at 1:37 pm

    brilliant!

  • rose May 6, 2010 at 2:53 pm

    i want to shout it out very warm!!!

  • oshin July 10, 2010 at 4:00 am

    its a sweet n lovely poem!
    it mostly describes everyone’s views and thoughts about there life!

  • TEBELLO July 27, 2010 at 4:18 am

    Its so brilliant, alive and real. I like it and it relates to everyone.

  • Pranjal October 29, 2010 at 8:30 pm

    Its so so so brilliant

  • rohit January 6, 2011 at 10:03 pm

    i can also write in same manner …………………..
    need help …

  • megha February 28, 2011 at 5:30 am

    short and sweet

  • Rupesh Popli April 24, 2011 at 11:54 pm

    Somehow…now only after reading your poem…I can tell..its by you…u r great with words dude….

  • Nishant Verma August 25, 2011 at 7:44 am

    Its a nice poem, describes all kind of situations in life. Great words

  • sanjana February 1, 2012 at 5:04 am

    superb:)

    • Praveen February 2, 2012 at 7:11 am

      Thank you Sanjana.

  • wangdi February 1, 2012 at 7:50 pm

    awesome poem i love to read your poem please i personally request to you do not stop to wright

  • wangdi February 1, 2012 at 7:51 pm

    nice poem i love to reak your poem

    • Praveen February 2, 2012 at 7:11 am

      Thank you.

  • Benny February 3, 2012 at 4:28 am

    Some day all will account for the life given us !!!!!!!!

  • batul2000 March 9, 2012 at 10:44 pm

    really luv dis poem i can relate it wid my own lyf
    gr8 work
    awsme

  • Abtelli April 9, 2012 at 2:39 am

    Really beautiful poem. I feel the same way.
    Thank you.