Do I belong?

Written By: shrithi.malaika.narayan  |  Category: Life  |  (13) Comments  |  

Lost in a world so full of rights,
Nobody cares to see my plight.

Born as a child filled with a want,
I am still the female gene nobody wants.

Excluded from society
Here I stand loosing my dignity.

What more could i ask for than a life,
But now I pray for my sacrifice.

Day by day, I am a liability,
I stand now showing you my ability.

I am the child you once rejected,
And now all I ask is for you to take me back.

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  • Tiffany Watkins said: (Thursday April 8th, 2010)

    I to a point can relate to this, so I realy like it, I believe a lot of people could relate to it. It was a very well written poem; and I liked it.
    Signed;
    once rejected

  • Neeraj said: (Monday April 12th, 2010)

    Wonderful poem… I want to make a short film on this poem. Is there any way I can contact you or you please drop me a mail at the above mentioned mail id. Thank you.

  • Praveen said: (Wednesday April 14th, 2010)

    Neeraj,

    Please email me and i can give you the poem author’s contact details to take it further.

  • Amosun adeola emmanuel said: (Wednesday June 2nd, 2010)

    the poem is amazing. do you use to compile them yourself?

  • Thomas said: (Wednesday June 23rd, 2010)

    that is exactly how i feel tonight, except im a male

    i can relate

  • bianx said: (Saturday August 7th, 2010)

    i wish i could also write a poetry. i like it. :-)

  • Augustana said: (Tuesday January 11th, 2011)

    Wow, thats amazing stuff about life !

  • Tina said: (Wednesday January 12th, 2011)

    i love that poem!! feel really truth and relate to me

  • Yena said: (Thursday June 9th, 2011)

    A true poets words..
    signed,
    A lover of words…

  • Cammy said: (Wednesday November 23rd, 2011)

    Is touching me…thk for this poem i put up on facebook…

  • JB said: (Thursday March 29th, 2012)

    Used poem as a part of a class project.

  • Praveen said: (Thursday March 29th, 2012)

    Hope you had given the due credit.

  • MoHanna MC said: (Saturday March 16th, 2013)

    Such a beautiful poem, keep writing,


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