Written By: neha.maheshwari  |  Category: Love  |  (7) Comments  |  

My loved one has goneA Bit Of Love
the pain is beyond tears and words
No-one can release me from
the torment that remains
what is there left but an empty world?
Life becomes a torturous sentence and the realization
that grief is the price of love

There are things I have that I can’t see,
Things that change inside of me.
What, oh what, can those things be?
My feelings!

I search each dark corner
hoping, just hoping, for a healing beam of light
Tell me, what is it like when the
bottom falls out of your world?
When life ceases to have any meaning
when your heart breaks in two
and there seems no reason to go on

But it’s the fact; life has to move on…

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  • miki said: (Sunday October 4th, 2009)

    hi…neha.this was really gud 1…!!!n a bitter fact about life.. v face sometimes….n find oueselves helpless 2 cop with….bt than…life has 2 go on…thats th immortal fact…

  • Aly said: (Monday November 23rd, 2009)

    So calm but so sad feeling…

  • nicholas said: (Friday April 9th, 2010)

    that is so sad.. i feel the sadness. i hope you’re ok now. may the God of hope fill you with joy, peace and love.

  • pooja said: (Wednesday October 5th, 2011)

    Neha I appreciate the way you have expressed your feeling.I hope best for your future may god bless you .

  • Mbhazima said: (Thursday July 12th, 2012)

    is cool but so sad, very touching

  • Mbhazima said: (Thursday July 12th, 2012)

    it’s so cool but very touching feelings

  • sherlockholmesfan said: (Sunday July 22nd, 2012)

    wow that’s a good one i really love it and i mean that where did you get the inspiration to write that peom it’s so good and i mean that tooo

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