March 26, 2012

sitting in the room,
thinking about everything so far,
i am beginning to wonder
if life is supposed to be like this;

high on a pedestal one day,Lonely Man Sitting
kissing the dirt the next,
the balance keeps tilting
from the good to the bad;

nobody said life would be easy and simple,
but nobody said life can be so hard,
struggling through a hazy cloud of confusion,
life seems a bitch;

one hand giving things not asked,
while the other not giving things asked,
it’s like taking one step forward,
and two steps backward;

disheartened and feeling the blues,
the road to happiness seems to be enigmatic,
in this crystal maze of life
the game goes on until the end;

  • Ranu March 28, 2012 at 12:06 am

    Beautiful… ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Praveen March 28, 2012 at 5:29 am

      Thank you.

  • Ranu April 12, 2012 at 12:38 am

    Looking forward to your next poem.

  • Kate April 12, 2012 at 7:22 am

    I really liked this poem and i hope you keep writing.

  • Asmaรข April 27, 2012 at 6:11 pm

    I dont usually leave comments for something I read, but after reading what you’ve created, I felt the need of thanking you.
    Im and 18year old student, and right now, I am going through a phase of my life : cloudy, blurry, and a tournado of question marks and confusions happening that give me the feeling that happinness is a thousand miles away.. sadly, we live in a world where good people have to fight, and the bad ones can have it easy..
    but we have to keep believing in a better tomorrow, and climb up on top of the pedestal all over again.. after all, if life wasnt such a bumpy ride and a challenge, it wouldnt be as much interesting..

    fighting for a better tomorrow.. And wishing you all the best!
    Sending love all the way from Morocco.

    Asmaรข. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • julia April 29, 2012 at 7:33 pm

    yah cute!!!very creative..I like it.

  • ashler June 1, 2012 at 6:23 am

    keep on doing this great

  • cristina June 20, 2012 at 7:41 am

    its just soooo inspireing and creative really just fasinating ๐Ÿ™‚

  • Luz June 27, 2012 at 2:53 am


  • Rodzae July 2, 2012 at 2:41 pm

    I love dis poem soo much it’s beautiful Praveen u are telling a story and people dat go through struggles are the ones with heart. So keep yo head up praveen don’t let nothing keep u down.

  • Pansylee (Muse) VanMeeteren July 28, 2012 at 2:05 am

    Keep up the good job! This is very nice. ๐Ÿ™‚

  • eriemorganmaples August 3, 2012 at 2:17 pm

    i loved it but i didn’t like the word that you put in when it said this: ‘Life seems like a bitch’you could’ve left that word out and put some-thing else in there to make that sound better, but other than that it was a good poem i loved it, but that one word that you should’ve left out

  • gege ramon September 9, 2012 at 3:59 pm

    very nice! great lines! ๐Ÿ™‚

  • eriemorganmaples October 14, 2012 at 12:16 pm

    i wouldn’t agree with you on that gege ramon