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When we are together

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When we are together

i sit here watching
the twinkle of the stars,
the full moon in its beauty,
in the cool night breeze;

a feeling so strong, yet said very less,
a emotion that whirls around like a tornado,
but expressed not even a whisper;

as the gentle breeze tried to play a lullaby,
my eyes just refused to pay heed,
drowned in thoughts of you,
my mind was as fresh as it can be;

all these times, all those moments,
i can’t believe how i let go
i can’t understand why i didn’t say
what my heart was crying out loud;

I’m always thinking of you
thinking of expressing myself
but my words
when I look at you, when i speak with you
It always ends up to one thing
I just can’t think of
the right words to say;

if only the wind could carry
the unrevealed emotions
that my heart is crying out every night,
i would send it as my messenger right away!

should I tell you
how awful it feels
giving off our time alone
don’t you feel the pain
when your eyes lock with mine?

sometimes life can be deceiving
I’ll tell you one thing
it’s always better when we’re together,
promises, i dont make
of the riches and wealth,
all i have and all that i can
give you is my love
for as long as i am alive
to cement our future
to make our dreams come true!

 


First published on Mar 29, 2010. Re-published on June 05, 2020.

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7 comments

chaitanya May 24, 2010 - 11:16 pm

hi theseilikethese

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Ritu March 18, 2011 - 10:07 pm

Hey Praveen, this poem s juz outstanding one.. m luvin it, coz it has expressed d words of my heart… u r really blessed… keep going on dear….

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Logan Angel March 30, 2011 - 3:34 am

Tell me something Praveen. Is there a poem book of your’s i can buy.
If you are not a pro poem writer, i’ll eat my hat.
You should go on tour with your poems, they are WORLD CLASS. FACT

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shalu April 23, 2011 - 4:58 am

very very fantastic.i like it very much yahh

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Raequan Amy May 4, 2011 - 2:57 pm

ITSZ REALLY A GUD POEM

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Mario May 24, 2011 - 6:01 pm

Hello, i really love this poem. it is amzing that this poem can relate to me and other people. thanks for the poem :)

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Litta Kodak December 22, 2011 - 7:51 am

I really enjoyed reading your poems that you have wrote. They are really good. I love to write poems and hope to pubilish my in the furture. I have been writting them since i was 5 years old.Just keep up the great work that you have!!!!

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