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some days i want to live
some days i wish it’s over
some days i long to see
some days i wait to die;

some days i think i am fine
some days i believe i have a problem
some days i am strong
some days i am weak;

some days i am closer to truth
some days it seems far far away
some days i think i understand
some days i am just lost;

some days i just wish
everything would disappear
some days i just hope
you could be near;

some days i have a feeling
one day everything
will be alright
and that day is closer
than ever;

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“Many of the great achievements of the world were accomplished by tired and discouraged men who kept on working.”  ~Author Unknown

“What seems to us as bitter trials are often blessings in disguise”  ~Author Unknown

Hope begins in the dark, the stubborn hope that if you just show up and try to do the right thing, the dawn will come.  ~Anne Lamott

Hope is putting faith to work when doubting would be easier.  ~Author Unknown

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28 comments

dipti December 30, 2008 - 8:19 am

hey….nice poem……..sometimes even i feel the same!!!!!!!

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tana May 17, 2009 - 7:02 pm

nicely put

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V... July 2, 2009 - 10:36 pm

its a lovely poem..

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v... July 10, 2009 - 3:02 am

re-read it…yes, it is! :)

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miki October 4, 2009 - 4:53 am

wow….i liked it…as all these different kinda feelings..often come 2 my mind the same way,u described….keep it up.

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kathy October 6, 2009 - 8:02 pm

Kind of reminds me of the one I wrote called ‘I have many faces’

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Anorvan December 2, 2009 - 3:03 am

Dis Poem Reflects my life…!!! ;)

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LYN December 6, 2009 - 1:41 am

HEY! Praveen u can do better than that! I think u were pretty depresed at the time u wrote this poem . I do the same! SO hope to see some livelier poems from u .

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Shweta January 28, 2010 - 3:52 am

superb yaar…..
wat an imagination…….

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dee March 9, 2010 - 1:37 pm

brilliant!

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rose May 6, 2010 - 2:53 pm

i want to shout it out very warm!!!

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oshin July 10, 2010 - 4:00 am

its a sweet n lovely poem!
it mostly describes everyone’s views and thoughts about there life!

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TEBELLO July 27, 2010 - 4:18 am

Its so brilliant, alive and real. I like it and it relates to everyone.

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Pranjal October 29, 2010 - 8:30 pm

Its so so so brilliant

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rohit January 6, 2011 - 10:03 pm

i can also write in same manner …………………..
need help …

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megha February 28, 2011 - 5:30 am

short and sweet

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Rupesh Popli April 24, 2011 - 11:54 pm

Somehow…now only after reading your poem…I can tell..its by you…u r great with words dude….

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Nishant Verma August 25, 2011 - 7:44 am

Its a nice poem, describes all kind of situations in life. Great words

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sanjana February 1, 2012 - 5:04 am

superb:)

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Praveen February 2, 2012 - 7:11 am

Thank you Sanjana.

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wangdi February 1, 2012 - 7:50 pm

awesome poem i love to read your poem please i personally request to you do not stop to wright

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wangdi February 1, 2012 - 7:51 pm

nice poem i love to reak your poem

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Praveen February 2, 2012 - 7:11 am

Thank you.

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Benny February 3, 2012 - 4:28 am

Some day all will account for the life given us !!!!!!!!

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batul2000 March 9, 2012 - 10:44 pm

really luv dis poem i can relate it wid my own lyf
gr8 work
awsme

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Abtelli April 9, 2012 - 2:39 am

Really beautiful poem. I feel the same way.
Thank you.

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