Death to all my friends

Written By: Praveen  |  Category: Life, Sadness  |  (6) Comments  |  5,088 views

spirit
time has taken its toll
enduring everything life has thrown at me
i stand here on the verge on greatness,
on the threshold of a new life;

getting lost within myself
drifting further and further away
i have nothing left to do
i am so tired of these memories;

in a world of constant motion
i stand still, watching
the madness spread its tentacles
every nook and corner;

seeing my reflection in the puddle at my feet
my hands are cold and stained
as  my mind slowly drifted into insanity,
my energy slowly drained away;

as the knife fell down with a loud thump,
the blood started oozing out from the cut,
covering the hilt and slowly
dripping down to the floor;

the moonlight shines brightly
through the broken mirror,
as petals fall from the window
i ticked off another name from my list,
and stepped out into a Mad mad world
gone out of control;

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this is something that i started writing a long time ago, but never got around to finishing it until today.
image from the movie The Spirit
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Life being what it is, one dreams of revenge. – Paul Gauguin

It is a revenge the devil sometimes takes upon the virtuous, that he entraps them by the force of the very passion they have suppressed and think themselves superior to. -  George Santayana
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  • jill said: (Thursday May 21st, 2009)

    didnt get it yaar

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  • nocturnal said: (Wednesday January 20th, 2010)

    this is a heavy piece…
    but i like it…

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  • itumeleng said: (Saturday July 17th, 2010)

    It touchd me real hard nd made me feel I lost a friend and also emmotional rollercoaster!

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  • Rupesh Popli said: (Wednesday April 20th, 2011)

    Dude…its really amazing…I can connect.. ;-)

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  • Justin said: (Tuesday November 29th, 2011)

    Awwwwwwweeeee soooooommmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really a very hard work done

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  • Kristen said: (Thursday January 19th, 2012)

    This really was a heavy poem,if redone, I would suggest more detail over the reasoning behind the murder of the friends.

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