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disconnected from the world tonight
with my mind blank and seemingly shut tight
this emptiness that i feel all around me,
seems all the more familiar;
choking me from the inside,
my heart bundled up in my throat,
i could not say a word,
speechless, is all that i have become;
not a long left before this agony turns into ecstasy,
each day seems a bit longer than the previous one,
yet each moment that takes a eon to pass by,
makes it all worthwhile;
shivers rush up my spine
as the midnight air gently caress past,
i lay on my back and count the stars
twinkling in the moonlit sky, all alone;
why do we live
so far apart
i don’t know
but you will always be…..
Close to My Heart!!!
16 comments
nice poem, touching heart. ^_^
Hello Praveen,
just wanted to let u know, i’ve read almost all your poems and am a big fan of your poetry. very simple and beautifully expressed words and the most important thing is that they are very similar to mine. yes, i too write poems, very rarely though. would love to share them in this wonderful poetry world of yours. keep the good work going. its a real pleasure reading your poems.
Regards,
anu
Thank you Anu. I am glad to hear that and would be great if you can share some of your poems. Would love to read them.
Regards
Praveen
hi praveen,
simply superb…there is no words to express.
as u had expressed in your poetry.
what to tell about these poetries…………..
Really those are heart touching.
keep it going…
regards.
Mohan
Hi Praveen,
Wonderful poem! heart-felt!
-K
i love the poem….!!!
its js so awesum…….i ws lost in a trance while i ws readin it……
gr8 wrk !!!!
amazing poem
wow this is beautiful poetry
I love these lines –
“I may not always be here for you,
I may not always say, ” I love you ”
But in my thoughts, my heart and soul,
You will always be my knight in shining armor.”
this poem touch and i really love it god bless you never stop writting
it’s such a gr8 poem rly i like it …………plz don’t stop writing coz every poem u’ll write u’ll feel more better…..! <3
Lovely Poem <3
i….ummm..perso…sorry forget it
what a lovely poem….thanks..*smiles*
hey Praveen
i really like your poems especially the one Close To My Heart.its really amazing keep up your sprit its really a heart-touching poem
Really Praveen,all of poems are heart Touching.Love to Read them….
Thank you.