Love, Sadness

Broken Hearted

February 16, 2010

The shattering of my heart when you said goodbye
Is like the waves of the ocean crashing against the rocks…..

I stood there in the doorway
Begging you not you leave,
But you looked at me and said nothing.

Your silence shot through my body
Strait through my heart heart
Right to my soul, I was taken aback.

It was hard for me to breathe,
I choked on my own words,
It was like I was dying.

All I could do was stand there with tears in my eyes
And watch the very thing I tried so hard to build up
Come crashing down on top of my head.

Can’t you see what this is doing to me?
It breaks my heart that you can stand there and not say a word.
No explintations, no reasoning, nothing.

My body is shaking from the core within
And I’m sick to my stomach.
I can’t make sense of all this, and the more I try, the weaker I get.

You finally look me in my face
I notice you can’t look me in my eye.
I want you to tell me everything will be fine.

I want to know everything will be go back to the way it was.
I want to know that you love me and won’t leave me,
but tthe look of your face says different.

The look on your face says it’s all over
The look in your eyes says you want out.
The way you move says that you don’t love me anymore.

My heart is breaking and I want to die.
You walk to me and kiss me on the cheek and walk out the door.
You’re gone like that., without a word.

As you shut the door, I walk to the couch and lay down.
I lay on the couch where we first kissed.
I ball up like a baby and die from a broken heart.

  • Tammy February 16, 2010 at 8:13 am

    This is a really good it’s says it all

  • Shalini March 29, 2010 at 11:51 pm

    nice one…i loved it…

  • alamelu April 3, 2010 at 6:05 am

    very heartful & tearful emotion. It filledup my heart

  • deepti singh..dehradun April 7, 2010 at 1:11 am

    it was really a touching poem…
    i just loved it…

  • katie May 10, 2010 at 8:47 am

    wen i read this i started cryin cuz it reminded me of the pain for my ex

  • Dreamer August 19, 2010 at 9:19 am

    IT was a awesome poem..It happened with me too……Think i am not alone

  • Kiara September 14, 2010 at 8:10 am

    that was so deep..iloved it. i know how it feels to be brokenhearted..</3

  • Ayanda October 9, 2010 at 6:04 am

    Now i know that i have to keep a space just in case it comes around.

  • amna December 2, 2010 at 10:02 pm

    hi jani h r u i hope u r fine
    well aj kal kahan per ho ap yar online he nhi hoti why

  • Baber February 21, 2011 at 6:14 am


  • Tabitha-Louise March 21, 2011 at 7:42 am

    very good. I write poems too but not as good as this

  • Anthony April 23, 2011 at 4:11 am

    Brought back so many old feelings. So hard to see someone just walk away as if there was nothing,

    Stunning poem!!!

  • RUBY May 15, 2011 at 10:23 pm

    this is exactly wat just happened to me a couple hours hurts really bad but i guess its life..

  • Frances May 25, 2011 at 7:35 pm

    This Poem is too raw and real!! I cried when I read it as this is how I feel right now.

  • roma July 17, 2011 at 6:47 am

    your poem pains me a lot and stings my heart icried bitterly while i was reading it cause i remembered what happened with me.however,its a nice saddy poem.

  • stephanie July 25, 2011 at 9:22 pm

    I love this poem! its kind of what happend to me except i loved this boy for over a year gave him everything and i was cring one nigh because he said alot of hurtful things and he laughed in my face and still to this day cant look me in the eye or say anything to me.

  • kimberlyann quintal July 29, 2011 at 10:31 pm

    i love it liki mine,,,,

  • kitkat September 3, 2011 at 8:02 pm

    wow…..that was really deep…

  • Nancy January 7, 2012 at 7:39 am

    Exactly what i went through,very touching.I could have died especially that i was pregnant but Christ protected me,really was and Hes always by my side.

  • Andrea February 20, 2012 at 12:59 pm


  • mangotango February 23, 2012 at 6:50 am

    awwww this is sad:(

    • Praveen March 1, 2012 at 6:33 am


  • marcy segovia February 24, 2012 at 3:02 pm

    beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it!!